Bone of Contention: Chapter 7

Aug 28, 2011 15:03

Rating: M for sex and disturbing themes
Characters: Isa, Lea, Saïx, Axel, Xemnas
Pairings: Lea/Isa, Axel/Saïx, Xemnas/Saïx
Genre: Drama/Angst
Summary: Isa suffers from a rare bone disease, osteogenesis imperfecta. When Lea overlooks this in favour of having someone
to himself, Isa leaps at the opportunity and so begins their downward spiral from friends ( Read more... )

fandom: kingdom hearts, character: isa, fic type: multichapter, story: bone of contention, character: saïx

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devils_pet August 28 2011, 16:59:34 UTC
Aww yeah, chapter update! I was so excited when I saw a message on my email. The Kingdom Hearts fandom has been so quiet lately. I missed this.

As always, Isa's story makes me so sad, because we all know what's going to happen. I love the friendship you describe between Isa and Lea, it's really touching.

Saix is even more interesting, because while he still cares for Axel as much as he can, he doesn't feel like he has a place in his world. Or at least, that's what I'm getting out of it. It seems like he feels so much less than Axel, that he welcomes Xemnas's attention.

Ugh, I've been gone forever, lost in another fandom. I'm glad you dragged me back with this fantastic story.

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minntaka August 30 2011, 11:21:31 UTC
Hey! Long time no speak :D Thanks for reading this even if you are in another fandom now (might I ask what fandom?).

I really struggled to dish out this chapter, but when I go back and read over it, it's not as bad as I think it is, so I'm pretty proud of it.

That is the general gist with Saix :) I want to write him to be different in reaction to Axel and actually question things as opposed to slipping into the easy and deluded life Axel is in.

Thanks again for reading! ♥

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devils_pet August 30 2011, 21:36:38 UTC
Man, Dragon Age has consumed me. Completely. Like, I still love Kingdom Hearts and FFVII, but Dragon Age has completely taken over my mind. It's probably dangerous. XD

Well, I enjoyed it. Maybe you had trouble with it because you've been up to other things lately? I'm glad you found that you liked it when you came back for a re-read, because, as always, it's fabulous.

I like that. Like, in this new world he doesn't really have to rely on Axel. He can move on his own just fine, and Axel is just as much of an outcast as he is. And, Xemnas has taken an interest in him, and not Axel. So it's almost like he's got more going for him in this new life.

I'm a loyal fan, I promise! I enjoy what you write, even if my minds been taken over by Dragon Age zombies at the moment. XD

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minntaka August 31 2011, 09:54:44 UTC
I'm not familiar with Dragon Age, but I know exactly how you feel as I've been completely consumed by FFIV at the moment! I just completed it yesterday but as you know, there's still the interlude and After Years to play too! (This is why I take so long to update now...)

0_o You are so spot on with this story it's kinda scary - Axel's redundancy is precisely what I'm aiming for XD

Aah thank you! ♥ It's always so kind of you to leave a comment for my works - I really appreciate it!

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devils_pet August 31 2011, 10:42:30 UTC
Ugh, it's fantastic. I would certainly recommend it. It's been such a long time since I played Final Fantasy IV, I'm assuming you enjoyed it? I really should replay it, considering all the love it gets.

Awww yeah! I'm glad I wasn't just spewing nonsense. I only understand it because you write it so wonderfully! *flatterflatter* XD

You're welcome! I enjoy leaving comments, and I see that there's a fic that missed. I suppose I'm just gonna have to go devour it. 8D

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minntaka August 31 2011, 21:16:54 UTC
I might have to look into it then - Hooray, more distractions! XD

Yeah, I absolutely adore FFIV! I've been turned into a giggly Cecil fangirl (and Dissidia hasn't helped much either!) and I'm starting to lean towards trying to write fanfics on him, but I really should concentrate on my plethora of KH works really :S

Haha I'm sure that's not the case - my writing can be really shaky at times. The fic you missed - Ersatz - is a twoshot with an embarrassing tale full of gratuitous angst and melodrama - you're more than welcome to skip it! :) ♥

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devils_pet September 1 2011, 02:13:58 UTC
Aren't they wonderful? Beautiful, sparkly distractions!

Well, if you feel overwhelmed with all the KH stuff you've got (Since you have like, three big stories going at once. XD) I see no problem with taking a break and practicing Cecil. I mean, with just finishing FFIV and playing Dissidia, I imagine it's fresher in your mind that KH.

Come now, gratuitous angst and melodrama is what I'm all about! Skipping it would be a silly move on my part!

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