Rating: M for sex and disturbing themes
Characters: Isa, Lea, Saïx, Axel, Xemnas
Pairings: Lea/Isa, Axel/Saïx, Xemnas/Saïx
Genre: Drama/Angst
Summary: Isa suffers from a rare bone disease, osteogenesis imperfecta. When Lea overlooks this in favour of having someone
to himself, Isa leaps at the opportunity and so begins their downward spiral from friends
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As always, Isa's story makes me so sad, because we all know what's going to happen. I love the friendship you describe between Isa and Lea, it's really touching.
Saix is even more interesting, because while he still cares for Axel as much as he can, he doesn't feel like he has a place in his world. Or at least, that's what I'm getting out of it. It seems like he feels so much less than Axel, that he welcomes Xemnas's attention.
Ugh, I've been gone forever, lost in another fandom. I'm glad you dragged me back with this fantastic story.
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I really struggled to dish out this chapter, but when I go back and read over it, it's not as bad as I think it is, so I'm pretty proud of it.
That is the general gist with Saix :) I want to write him to be different in reaction to Axel and actually question things as opposed to slipping into the easy and deluded life Axel is in.
Thanks again for reading! ♥
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Well, I enjoyed it. Maybe you had trouble with it because you've been up to other things lately? I'm glad you found that you liked it when you came back for a re-read, because, as always, it's fabulous.
I like that. Like, in this new world he doesn't really have to rely on Axel. He can move on his own just fine, and Axel is just as much of an outcast as he is. And, Xemnas has taken an interest in him, and not Axel. So it's almost like he's got more going for him in this new life.
I'm a loyal fan, I promise! I enjoy what you write, even if my minds been taken over by Dragon Age zombies at the moment. XD
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0_o You are so spot on with this story it's kinda scary - Axel's redundancy is precisely what I'm aiming for XD
Aah thank you! ♥ It's always so kind of you to leave a comment for my works - I really appreciate it!
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Awww yeah! I'm glad I wasn't just spewing nonsense. I only understand it because you write it so wonderfully! *flatterflatter* XD
You're welcome! I enjoy leaving comments, and I see that there's a fic that missed. I suppose I'm just gonna have to go devour it. 8D
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Yeah, I absolutely adore FFIV! I've been turned into a giggly Cecil fangirl (and Dissidia hasn't helped much either!) and I'm starting to lean towards trying to write fanfics on him, but I really should concentrate on my plethora of KH works really :S
Haha I'm sure that's not the case - my writing can be really shaky at times. The fic you missed - Ersatz - is a twoshot with an embarrassing tale full of gratuitous angst and melodrama - you're more than welcome to skip it! :) ♥
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Well, if you feel overwhelmed with all the KH stuff you've got (Since you have like, three big stories going at once. XD) I see no problem with taking a break and practicing Cecil. I mean, with just finishing FFIV and playing Dissidia, I imagine it's fresher in your mind that KH.
Come now, gratuitous angst and melodrama is what I'm all about! Skipping it would be a silly move on my part!
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