Comments | minnow_53: Fic: Chasing Rainbows

minnow_53

Fic: Chasing Rainbows

Jun 18, 2005 17:19

Chasing Rainbows
By minnow_53

Disclaimer: These characters belong to JK Rowling and various corporations.
Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Era: MWPP, around Sixth Year.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Sirius wants to experiment with Remus. A story of seduction, sex and love told via the colours of the rainbow.
Thanks: To astra_argentea for a quick beta.
Dedication: ( Read more... )

mwpp, happy

Comments 95

fortunateizzi June 18 2005, 10:01:11 UTC

Aw, so sweet. I really like the use of the rainbow as well, especially considering its homosexual implications. Well done.

minnow_53 June 18 2005, 11:20:51 UTC

Thank you! I didn't actually realise the implications of the rainbow until my beta told me, but they seemed appropriate!

Really glad you liked it.

^_^xx

bandonbanshee June 18 2005, 10:06:05 UTC

Exceptional approach -- very good portrayal of Remus' uncertainties and so so perfect to read while procrastinating. ♥ :)

minnow_53 June 18 2005, 11:22:17 UTC

My aim in life is to make procrastination even easier... And you've been working hard enough recently, so it's good to do nothing for a while.

Thanks so much for the comment! ♥

^_^xx

mushroom18 June 18 2005, 10:13:35 UTC

:)

:(

:|

It's pure physical want at first, but it always develops into something else, right? Right?

(I do make the weirdest of comments)

minnow_53 June 18 2005, 11:24:13 UTC

Well, it doesn't ALWAYS. *wicked grin* You've given me a brilliant bunny there, thank you! It does here, mind you. And yes, that is a weird comment, but I like weird, specially from you!

So thanks, btw! &hearts:

^_^xx

topaz_eyes June 18 2005, 10:14:49 UTC

This is just lovely, Minnow. It's poetic and vivid and I love how you weave the colors into each section. And even though it's PG-13, it's surprisingly hot.

minnow_53 June 18 2005, 11:26:40 UTC

Thank you very much for such a lovely comment!

This was meant to be an NC-17, but it simply wouldn't work. In fact, it nearly didn't get finished, because the guys wouldn't cooperate. So I'm really happy you found it hot! And that you liked it, of course!

^_^xx

topaz_eyes June 18 2005, 13:41:20 UTC

Who cares if it's not NC-17? Really, NC-17 is seriously over-rated. (Sorry for the pun.) Give me a good suggestive PG-13 story anyday. Sometimes the hotness exists in what doesn't get said, you know? As long as my brain is engaged, it doesn't miss graphic depictions of "insert tab A into slot B." It's happy if the story itself is excellent.

Besides, you just can't force these guys, they seem to do whatever the hell they want... ;-)

wildestranger June 18 2005, 10:22:09 UTC

Oh how I love this. Just the right amount of sweetness and uncertainty and longing. I particularly like your Sirius. Bless him and his curiousity.

Most adorable.

minnow_53 June 18 2005, 11:28:18 UTC

Thank you! My main problem in life is that I'm madly in love with Sirius Black, and I'm not Remus Lupin! Though I'm happy not to be a werewolf, of course. So I'm especially glad you like him: mind you, he's seen through Remus's eyes, so he may not be so nice in RL!

Thanks again! ♥

^_^xx

wildestranger June 18 2005, 12:12:53 UTC

Is it a problem? I'm madly in love with Remus Lupin, and it only brings great joy to my life. And a lot of porn. And enables me to write, which is the most marvellous thing in the world. And I also get to be Sirius Black and ogle Remus, and be Remus and ogle Sirius. What could be better?