Birthday Gift for Hannah

[miniluv68]

Title: French Kissing on Vacations and the Wonder of Hermione's Laughter on a Warm Australian Day on the Beach

Comments

[fembuck]

OMG, sooo cute! Your Fleur especially was too cute for words. I loved the whole things, lots of great laugh out loud lines:

“Oh! For fuck’s sake! Eet iz my ‘ome! I like it ‘ere!” Fleur glared ...

and

“Fine, but I am going to be a perfect lady about eet, unlike you. I will not whine. I will show you ‘ow one should act.”

“Oh, it iz ‘orrible out ‘ere, simply ‘orrible.” Fleur wrinkled her nose in disgust.

and

“Oh my! It certainly is dreadfully hot!” Hermione tsk-ed as she looked up at the sky. She shook her head gravely. “I think its best you take off your pants as well, Fleur.”

and

Hermione then came to the conclusion that she had two choices: she could lie, or she could tell the truth.

Well, that certainly was very helpful.

And so much more!

Really funny and sweet. More, more ... please :D

[miniluv68]

Hahaha, I'm glad you liked it, I will be sure to do my best and write more as soon as possible. :)

[demoka]

*laughs* so funny! so random too! i dunno, it was just... so random how it began, but i'm not complaining! XP

[miniluv68]

Hahaha, yeah, I was on vacation when I started it, and I had no idea what to write, so I just kind of started putting things down. Next thing I knew, it was actually almost a story! :D

[lash_larue]

Hermione, in a post-orgasmic daze, concluded that angels should always be covered in come, because Fleur never looked better than now (and Fleur was obviously an angel).

I cannot decide if that line is funny, profound, hot, or just profoundly hot and funny. In any case, I really liked this.

L

[miniluv68]

I'm glad, I really liked that line too, actually.

On another note, I've been staring at your icon trying to decide what to make out of it...

[lash_larue]

Well, I answer questions.
:)

[miniluv68]

...I swear I thought I gave a reply to this...

Hmm...

Yes anyways, I'm confused if it's a flower coming out of someone's pants, and if it is, why is their skin black? Like, the same color as the pants.... *stares in confuzlement*

[jaxinthebox]

I particulary like this because it doesn't have the gross terms some authors use to describe "The female great wonder" I love it.
Very nicely written. I very much enjoyed it.

[miniluv68]

Hahahaha, I know what you mean. I try very hard not to use those particular words that I find... extremely disturbing and not the least sexy. Many thanks.

[nightmarezangel]

Lovely fic hon, you know i love your writing (or else I wouldn't bug to thread with you so often) *love*

[miniluv68]

Ah! You're everywhere! *runs in circles waving arms like a bird*

Yes, *ahem*. Tankoo Ceri! Your pic made me stare with wonder...

[nightmarezangel]

yeah, i know, i'm a hottie eh? ;)

[miniluv68]

Teehee.