Patience and Adaptation [Harry/Severus - PG - 7500]

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Title: Patience and Adaptation
Author: me_midget
Pairing: Harry Potter/Severus Snape
Prompt: Inspiration taken from #52 and #105 (both 2015) with a good dose of mpreg and hurt/comfort
Word Count: 7,500
Rating: PG
Contains (Highlight to view): *mpreg, past non-canon character death (neither Harry nor Snape)*
Disclaimer: Harry Potter characters are the

Comments

[alafaye]

This is adorable. Well written!

[alisanne]

Hurt/comfort indeed.
Poor Harry. You did a good job of conveying his pain over Oliver's death and his conflicted feelings about finding Severus attractive.
Ginny is a good friend, bless her. Glad Harry relented in the end.
This is a nice start to their relationship. Well done!

[suitesamba]

What a great job balancing Harry's growing attraction for Severus with his sorrow and grieving for Oliver. Really good pacing and realistic telling, with some nice supporting characters. Kudos!

[reynardo]

That was lovely and sweet. I don't normally read Mpreg, but that one was fine - worked well for me.

I do have one question though - how did Harry know it was going to be a boy?

[smirkingcat]

as odd as it may sound to myself-
i really enjoyed this story!
i dont read this paring- but someone tipped me off that i might enjoy this one
so i checked it out
and wow!
this is great!
it was cute, and fluffy and sad
and i adored ginny
i liked the tumult of harry
and you nailed! nailed snape
the shop, the way he talks his practicality *waves snape flag*
really well done and enjoyable
great work !
and you really managed to make them both work for me, and that really is quite a thing! congrats! its very entertaining