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FIC: Now It's Your Choice [Draco/Albus Severus - NC-17]

Dec 01, 2014 14:52

Title: Now It’s Your Choice
Author: gracerene
Pairing(s): Draco/Albus Severus, implied Harry/Ginny, mention of past Draco/Astoria
Prompt: #18 by birdsofshore
Word Count: ~4,750
Rating: NC-17
Contains (Highlight to view): *Albus is 16, teacher/student relationship, power dynamics, light D/s, blowjobs, a bit of dirty talk, dub-con*
Disclaimer: Harry Potter characters are ( Read more... )

pairing: albus severus/draco, 2014, rating: nc-17, -fic

Comments 23

birdsofshore December 1 2014, 23:16:39 UTC

Bloody nora, MA, wtf happened here? I didn't even remember leaving this prompt! And then here you are, and here THEY are, and is it my egotism or did you just go through my list of likes and hit about a million of them on purpose? Wow. I was like this when I saw the list of 'warnings' O_O. And it did NOT disappoint.

I've been child wrangling all evening and I'm really short of time, but I had to read this and say a quick thank you for this utterly delicious and wrong treat you have given us here. I'd love to come back and tell you all of the things I loved about it. And reread the whole filthy tale again. Meanwhile, god, thank you. I feel completely spoiled with this yummy thing. ♥

birdsofshore December 2 2014, 19:55:45 UTC

Well, it was no hardship AT ALL to come back and reread this. What a corking, smutty tale this is. The dubcon is quite delicious. My favourite part of all is when they kiss and Al freaks out to find that Draco is hard. (Oh, and THANK YOU for Draco having a large cock ♥). He was so pleased with his little rebellion over the kiss, but then shit got real, and Albus backpedalling and Draco pushing and being so manipulative was just a JOY.

And then as soon as Albus agreed, the way Draco's hands were instantly in his pants. OMG ♥

Draco is such a superb GIT. This whole section was super hot:

"You’ve never sucked cock before, have you?" Draco inquired, keeping his tone pleasant to keep Al as ease and delighted when his bluntness inspired a visible shiver. Draco’s hands went to his waistband, undoing his flies and pushing his trousers down. "You’ve thought about it though, haven’t you? Dreamed about it. Wondered how I'd feel in your mouth."

He's so smug and self-assured!

Albus’ blush darkened as he nodded, his eyes fixed firmly on the ( ... )

birdsofshore January 8 2015, 08:25:16 UTC

EEEEE, grace, it was you! (((((((grace)))))))

What a treat you wrote something for my prompt, and now of course it makes perfect sense that there were so many of my likes in there, heh. Thank you ♥

gracerene January 8 2015, 19:22:50 UTC

It was me! Did you know, is that who you'd guessed? I felt like I totally gave myself away, because I told you I wrote in two holiday fests and then this posted the next day! /fail

This has probably been the most difficult piece I've written so far; such a struggle to get the dynamic where I wanted it, but I'm glad you liked it!

LOL, yes, we share so many kinks, it was pretty easy to include things I knew you enjoyed.

Thanks so much for your super lovely comment, definitely made me happy! <3

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digthewriter December 2 2014, 06:03:17 UTC

super hot! thanks for sharing.

gracerene January 8 2015, 21:22:13 UTC

I keep meaning to respond to you comment, but your icon is very distracting! *stares some more*

Thanks, hon!

suitesamba December 2 2014, 08:06:39 UTC

So hot and masterfully written. For your first time with this pairing you did a superb job!

gracerene January 8 2015, 21:23:49 UTC

Oh, thank you so very much! :D

nicevenn December 2 2014, 19:45:03 UTC

This was so hot. I loved their interactions as they tested the waters. Go Al!

gracerene January 8 2015, 21:24:17 UTC

LOL, glad you enjoyed it! Al certainly did! :D

capitu December 3 2014, 12:48:10 UTC

Oh my god, mystery writer, you've got to know hoe much I love this.

I love your Albus, I love the way Draco sees him, so different fromHarry, even with the obvious similarities, the arresting green eyes, but then the full, lush lips, mmhmm. Oh yeah, he's definitely been looking! And then Al being a Slytherin but with that sweetness underneath, you've written such a perfect Al.

And then, Jesus, the way he ~seduces Al, all the words he used, smoking hot and sweet lovely Al was perfect. Man! The dirty talking!!!! I loved it.

I love how you wrote them, this was amazing.

gracerene January 8 2015, 22:07:46 UTC

♥

Thank you so much for all your support and lovely comments, hon! It means a lot!