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[mingsmommy]

My e-mail has been sporadic all day…if you need me, use my g-mail savvix at gmail.com and I’ll answer…provided I don’t take a hammer to the laptop first.

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Comments

[zamboni12]

First I need to say I don´t have a clue who you´re talking about in your story, I don´t know the characters or the backround. Nevertheless the story works for me and that´s because of your way with words.
If Serenity doesn’t feel right, Kaylee knows; feels it like a mother wakes from the dead sleep of deepest night to hurry unbidden to the side of a babe, feeling a sudden fever, wiping away a sleeping tear This line is plainly perfect.

I know, concrits are useful and needed to improve, but I think, to find a forum like lastficstanding where all writers are playing by it´s rules is the best way to get concrits, because they mean business and you know they don´t want to "hurt" you but help you.
I have to confess that I follow the "If you don't have anything nice to say..." philosophy of commenting. Since I´m a non-native speaker I would never dare to "rub salt in someones wound."
I know by experience, how hard it is to write a good story (in german in almost the same manner like in english) so I stick to this "philosopie" unless someone would ask me to make a concrit (as far as I´m able to do so).

Hey, and I pretty much enjoy your "dog opera"-story. That rather funny!
Hugs, Heike

[mingsmommy]

Firefly was a short lived sci-fi series and Serenity was a follow up movie. Think outer space meets American western. Characters were incredibly beautiful and complex. Dialogue was great, cinematography and costuming were simply gorgeous. The whole thing is brilliant. You should check it out...it really is genius.

Thank you for your kind words Heike...you are always so lovely and generous with comments and support. You mean the world to me. *hugs*

And the dog opera is very funny. They play with each other through the fence when nobody is looking...but when they see me coming it's major dog drama.