{five} Sin S(e)oul

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title: Sin S(e)oul
word count: 2963w
pairing: Onho, Jongkey
genre: crime, drama, action, romance
overall rating: NC-17
warning: Presence of violence, (consensual and not) sex, prostitution, gambling and mafia activities in general
summary: What happens when you become part of a powerful organization that could make you feel alive as much as dead? And

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[such_a_sadsound]

OTL I know, I bet I would have written a full on 5 paged essay. >.<

wahhhh i'm jelly that the Mafia is a part of your history. :p hahahaha that's the only thing that's a downside with the Mafia, that and all the betrayal that goes on in the families. ;~;

Mafia!Jinki is the best ever, but only this type. Do you know what I mean? This Jinki, because i've read a few other Mafia!Shinee fics but they always make Jinki kind of innocent, and lost at first who then turns into a cold blooded killer, don't get me wrong I love those Jinki's too, but JFC ruthless successor Jinki is by far the best. Omfg he is perfect. You deserve all these awards for creating your Jinki. and I swear i'm not saying that because i'm so Jinki biased. I just want to wrap Kibum in a blanket and tell him everything is going to be fine. T^T i always say that i hate angst, but i actually love angst so much it's like become apart of me bff!Jongho is the one of the best things ever. I always feel like that pairing is more like best friends. they'er my brotp lol :p

shhhhhhshshshshhhhhhhhhh this story is perfect, even if you missed some elements. :3

oh god i'm such a turd. when i finished this chapter i was ready to cry because i had to wait for you to update and i didn't see the link for AFF. ;; siyf;weyw wtowywlr i just finished reading up to chapter 9. I'm going to comment on here because aff doesn't let me write curse words. ._.

HOLY SHITTTTTTTTTT. JONGYU<33 It's going to be Platonic!Jonyu right? oh please let it be that, our perfect Jinki needs a best friend. then again maybe he doesn't because his cold demeanor is the thing that attracted me to him. What Jinki told Minho though in the 8th chapter I think it was, about detaching himself from people broke my heart, and amazed me because that's something that mobsters would do, or actually do. idek what i'm saying right now to be honest but i feel like they would do that. ;~; JINKI FEELING UP MINHO YES PLS. Minho saying his body belonged to Jinki is all kinds of right. I would want to be Jonghyun right then and there just to witness that whole scene omfg. /cries/
Kyuhyun though. for some reason I feel like the man that he's in love with is Jinki, i kind of hope i'm correct and then wrong at the same time. I don't want bb kyu to get heartbroken because onhooooo is 5eva<3.

You're welcome. ^.^ and Thank you, for writing this lovely, lovely story. c:

IS THAT THE ONE WITH STEVE BUSCEMI?!?!?! I LOVE HIM SO MUCH, HE'S ONE OF MY FAVORITE ACTORS/sobs/ I've been wanting to watch it but i've so preoccupied with all these other things that I don't have time.