{four} Sin S(e)oul

[minewsadvocate]

title: Sin S(e)oul
word count: 3008w
pairing: Onho, Jongkey
genre: crime, drama, action, romance
overall rating: NC-17
warning: Presence of violence, (consensual and not) sex, prostitution, gambling and mafia activities in general
summary: What happens when you become part of a powerful organization that could make you feel alive as much as dead? And

Comments

[yapikao]

Is Jinki meant to be a bad guy in this fic? lol. Maybe I'm too... idk Minew obsessed. Because I see every action of Jinki in relation to Minho. lol. So. I don't see Jinki as a bad guy more like someone obsessed with Minho. Maybe I'm delusional? Am I?

But the fact that Jinki took the kid so he'd be safe ;__; makes me squee and its impossible for me to see Jinki as a bad guy lol. The Jinki scene was cool anyways *__*;;!

I didnt like the het scene T_____T ikrrjkhgkrd poor Kibum omfg. ugh. just ugh. horrible horrible Jessica. :/ Sorry. And ugh the explosion ;_; this chapter is so dfhfgkjhfd I don't know what to say tbh. I was surprised the first time I read it, so much happens. Its like bad, bad and then good. So it all works out (sorta) in the end.

And Minho ;__; everything is going so horribly wrong and stressful for him D: I'm curious to know what will happen when Jinki meets Minho ...

anyway D: dgjggkjfg keep writing o_o;; hwaiting bb. It's kind of amazing/unbelievable that this is your first fic tbh its so good. o__o; you are amazing.
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