{one} Sin S(e)oul

[minewsadvocate]

title: Sin S(e)oul
word count: 3043w
pairing: Onho, Jongkey
genre: crime, drama, action, romance
overall rating: NC-17
warning: Presence of violence, (consensual and not) sex, prostitution, gambling and mafia activities in general
summary: What happens when you become part of a powerful organization that could make you feel alive as much as dead? And

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[minewsadvocate]

Aww don't worry about it ;__; I read on your journal that you were sick :( I hope you feel better now^^

I don't know how to describe the perfection of your comment ;__;

You know… I've always sucked at dialogues. I don't know if you noticed, but there is not much dialogue xD I prefer describing things ;__; because I thought my dialogue was always so lame :/
After reading your comment… I think you made me the happiest first-time writer ever *__*
I love you for loving my dialogue <3

I know Jonghyun and Kyuhyun's friendship is quite unusual (actually, I didn't know xD cause I don't read many fics) It's just that I see Kyuhyun's dorky personality perfect for Jonghyun's one haha

Recently Minho and Kibum said they used to not be in a really good relationship when they debuted… And to be quite honest I've always seen them very different from each other. I'm extremely happy that now they have got over their awkwardness and they are more close to each other…
in this fic though… they can't stand each other xD but it's not that they hate each other, it's just that they like to fight^^

To me… Jonghyun and Minho have the best friendship ever. (which is not love, I don't ship Jongho and never will lol) I'm glad you felt it in this chapter :)

It's funny, you said that the way I write actions is like a movie. That's the exactly what I think too. I guess I like to go deep with details, just like movies?

I think I need to stop here xD Because if I talk about the Jongkey scene I'd be able to write a novel about it lol

Thank you my dear, your comment was perfect, amazing and you are awesome.

Here sexy Jinki for ya~

[hitoshisakurai]

More than sick, I was fed up with some things, but, yupp, I'm alright now ;3

You know... we're kinda the opposite xD Like, I've always been way more confident about writing dialogues than describing, so.. x"D but, girl, they are really great. Now that you mentioned it, yup, there's not so many dialogues in it, but when they appear they're there for something, they're meaningful and really well-though and well-written and I really love them <3

Hahaha, there was a variety show in which Key said that Minho's a close friend of his *my JongKey heart kinda broke back then XDDDD*. But yeah, they're just so different and I love the way their relationship works in this fic, it's very refreshing ^w^

Me neither, I don't ship Jongho x"D And yupp, bff!Jongho is precious... bff!Jongyu too, but bff!Jongho is the best of a kind.

Yupp, and I really admire you for that, I wish I could make descriptions like you ;~~~;

OHMYGODSEXYJINKIWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH <3333

Can't wait for the next part!!!!!!>////////