{one} Sin S(e)oul

[minewsadvocate]

title: Sin S(e)oul
word count: 3043w
pairing: Onho, Jongkey
genre: crime, drama, action, romance
overall rating: NC-17
warning: Presence of violence, (consensual and not) sex, prostitution, gambling and mafia activities in general
summary: What happens when you become part of a powerful organization that could make you feel alive as much as dead? And

Comments

[hitoshisakurai]

SPOT FOR MEH~~
squealing in excitement

[minewsadvocate]

omg. i was planning to leave you a spot ;__; but I forgot D:

[hitoshisakurai]

And I'm late with this comment -.-
*excited to see you got so many comments <33333

[minewsadvocate]

Aww don't worry about it ;__; I read on your journal that you were sick :( I hope you feel better now^^

I don't know how to describe the perfection of your comment ;__;

You know… I've always sucked at dialogues. I don't know if you noticed, but there is not much dialogue xD I prefer describing things ;__; because I thought my dialogue was always so lame :/
After reading your comment… I think you made me the happiest first-time writer ever *__*
I love you for loving my dialogue <3

[onhoing]

;_; i love your jongkeyho dynamics!

anw bb, tbh, i rather like slow moving fics. like, the development is slowly being built and i anticipate for it every time. i think that's okay cos i'd rly rather read those over fics that are...hurried in terms of plot.
/is rambling/ sorry OTL

so yeah. thanks for the update and i can't wait for the next parts! fighting bb o/

[minewsadvocate]

thank you bb =D I'm glad you like them interacting like that^^

And I'm especially happy you like slow moving fics :) I just thought that most readers like to read things that are fast and easy to read (my fic is not that easy, even I get stuck at some sentences when I re-read it xD) and I know people expect pairing interactions too. But since many of you like this kind of plot then I'll keep writing like that^^
/is rambling too/ xD

Thank you for your encouraging comment!

[yaoi_kpop_gurl]

ahhh i see this! just yesterday i found this as well! this is so good (Y)

[yaoi_kpop_gurl]

i wrote my first comment before actually reading it LOL
i cant wait for the onho stuff to happen cuz i love onho SO MUCH!!!!!...l even if its in like ch10 i dont mind the fic is brill...i like slow fics (not smut wise... plot wise haha) and i kinda hope Jinki is like Key in a way.. like job wise.... *youknowlikeatotallysluttyonewisthebestthingintheworld* and yeah :D i like the jongkey (even though i dont ship them that much i like it in this fic!) i would love to know what/who/how jinki is in this fic~

so yeah HWAITING!~
UPDATE SOON :D

[minewsadvocate]

I love Onho a lot too *____*
haha I know you can't wait for Jinki to appear, just be a little patient ok?^^

Well, I do love slow fics when it comes to smut too :P Really love reading smut in FULL details, although I'm not sure if I'll be able to do that when I'm gonna write those scenes xD

Thank you! and I will update soon, don't worry^^

[yaoi_kpop_gurl]

Omg yes me too!!! Smut is my forte ... I write it in too much detail lol
I even got so frustrated and wrote an onho one *facepalm* but i dont post on here but on aff

Ahh and yeah HWAITING for the update! I'll be a patient onho gurll ;)

[keziayansen]

I really love JongKeyHo friendship here, of course with deep relationship for jongkey, kekekeke.....
I wonder how's OnHo meeting then if u say that OnHo moment won't be revealed soon T_T
I think I just sit on my chair and wait patiently, hehe.....
update soon XD
Fighting <3

[minewsadvocate]

I'm really really glad you like their friendship! I tried to make this chapter lighter than the prologue just to emphasize the different setting^^

hahahaha are you really going to sit on your chair without eating, drinking and going to the restroom waiting for my chapter?? :P I feel flattered^^

Thank you~