Where were you all my life? 15/?

[minesomine]

Summary:
Kim Jaejoong owns a construction company and that forces him to do business with the mafia even if he himself tries to remain within the law. However, some of the mafia men don’t appreciate that and keep threatening him. That’s why he hired Changmin, Junsu and Yoochun who are responsible for his security.
Jung Yunho is a cop specialized in

Comments

[minesomine]

Oh, you noticed that little sentence there....

[minesomine]

I just had to insert that little observation some place somewhere cause.... just had to.

I can't help feeling more of a girly vibe from Yunho than from Jae. So... Yeahhh. I like it when top and bottoms get switched around.

Hot? So... I did ok?

[nanna36]

It was great reading about Yunho's inner thought. I love that you actually made Jae the top in this relationship. The story is getting more twisted in the good way. As u r creating your chapters it is bringing more questions to the surfaces of your story. Great job and thank u.

[minesomine]

*bows with happy face*
Thank you so much for giving me feedback. I really appreciate it.

I keep adding characters. I don't know from where they show up. I still have no idea how many chapters this will have. Any way, they are all rather small chapters.
I'm even trying to add some action to the investigation of the back story of who-did-it and who-did-what.
The next chapters bring some more sexiness. I'm going to spicy up the place.

Jae tops. Yunho is too cute to top. At least the way I'm writing it.
Ah, Yunho's inner thought. Right when I wrote the first three chapters this was what I already had in mind for Yunho.

[minesomine]

Jae top alert.
http://minesomine.livejournal.com/7563.html

LOL