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minesomine

Where were you all my life? 14/?

Feb 03, 2014 09:17

Summary:
Kim Jaejoong owns a construction company and that forces him to do business with the mafia even if he himself tries to remain within the law. However, some of the mafia men don’t appreciate that and keep threatening him. That’s why he hired Changmin, Junsu and Yoochun who are responsible for his security.
Jung Yunho is a cop specialized in ( Read more... )

violence, yoosu, minjunki, yunjae, smut, fic: where were you, action

Comments 10

songbird52317 February 3 2014, 23:52:22 UTC

I read this this morning in the car, but didn't have time to comment. I'm surprised I'm the first. I liked this chapter a lot. Hoping to see a little working together between the two of them sometime in the future, but I expect both of them, particularly Yunho to continue to be cautious about revealing much.

Loved the sleepy silly Yunho!

minesomine February 4 2014, 09:09:41 UTC

Thanks for commenting. I love feedback. *hugs*
I have no idea from where I got sleepy silly Yunho. That thing just totally creped up on me when I was writing.
It was sooooo out there, like he had been smoking pot or something. But I loved it.

Yunho is annoyingly cautious. In some things. In others... *face-palms*

minesomine February 6 2014, 17:17:39 UTC

Hi. Already figured out how they are going to work together, these two short temper guys.
And big revelations are going to come. Should be writing that soon. Wish me luck.

miroticsoul February 6 2014, 11:59:17 UTC

"Who made you king?" and this moment I swear we all heard the real Changmin, Lord Voldemin!

minesomine February 6 2014, 12:01:00 UTC

Yep, Min is not very happy to have Yunho talk back at him.

minesomine February 6 2014, 17:18:54 UTC

Lol, added a pic on this chapter just for you: scary Min. Don't ever think of stealing his cookies. He will kill u.

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minesomine February 8 2014, 08:45:17 UTC

Yunho must have pot when he gets sleepy. At least now we know it wasn't just Jae who noticed lips.

Aren't we awesome? I had that line come at me one of these days and when I sat down to write I just had to put it there.
Yes, they aren't exactly 100% or 99% good at their jobs. Still too young and inexperienced, maybe?

Yunho doesn't really want to hurt anyone, just arrest them. Worried for Jae? Yep, I'd say he's starting to, even if he doesn't know it.

chihana11 February 16 2014, 18:37:50 UTC

I'm glad JJ and YH are starting to understand each other a bit more.

minesomine February 16 2014, 18:38:47 UTC

Slowly but yes, they are. It's a bumpy road and they are both very stubborn.

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minesomine August 4 2015, 10:05:18 UTC

Now they jump in bed together in the interest of mutual cooperation. /coughs/