Jealous or The Ultimate Betrayal - 1/2

[minesomine]

Author: Minesomine with Ichigotabetai's contribution
Pairing: main Yunjae and Yoosu, other pairings
Rating: Rated for themes, violence and language
Warnings: Trigger for jealousy,infidelity, betrayal, verbal abuse and attempted rape
Summary: They were the perfect couple. Or were they?

Comments

[chihana11]

Spotty Spot McSpotterson.

[chihana11]

I'm really happy you are writing again. Off to part 2...

[minesomine]

Hi, Spotty Spot McSpotterson. How are you?

[chihana11]

Hehehe?... I've broken out in spots! I was a bit worried to read this..

[minesomine]

I didn't want to go into too dark territory. The plot was already a bit too twisted for my taste.
I was rather surprised at myself when I came up with this idea. I really need to get back to my fluff.

Yunho's personality in this is just so a dime a dozen. Lots of people out there exactly like that. Yep, very potty mouths. I had trouble with that. It's hard to write potty mouths.

[chihana11]

Your cuddly fluff! I need some. I'm in a fluff craving phase lately.

I like the plot twist at the end of this, very surprising. Don't wanna spoil it tho...

[minesomine]

Fluff is hard to find.

I caught you by surprise? /grins happily/

[chihana11]

Yes you did. I didn't think it was the terrible twosome doing that.
Dirty pigs.
*Smacks them.

[minesomine]

/preens/
Guess I am good at twists and surprises.

[chihana11]

You are!

Preen away.