Connections - chapter 12

[minesomine]

Title: Connections
Pairings: Yoomin, Yunjae,
Warnings: Jaejoong and Junsu het, mpreg
Rating: Rated
Genre: Fantasy + Sci-fi
Summary: Somewhere in a possible distant future, there are colonies on distant planets. One of these planets has dragons and more amazingly, even men can birth children due to ancient genetic manipulation. But the strangest

Comments

[chihana11]

You updated!!!!!!

It was fantastic baby momma, thank you.

Junsu was flying upside down and holding on to his dragon with his DB again! I love that and the interaction between him and Sara is so cute.



I was so happy when Lydia and YH talked. I hope the dragon drink did him some good.

Finally YC & CM are doing it and pointing up together! YES! Itsabouttimeforthehotsex!

[chihana11]

I think relationships and sex is more intense for the linked ones, they can feel the other's emotions telepathically so they feel and understand everything.

This seems so great; to feel your partners thoughts, and really know everything about them; but what if the couple are fighting? It might make the arguments more intense.

Also in a way no one has any privacy, even inside their own mind. Imagine never really being alone with your own thoughts? So much is different and they don't truly learn to communicate their feelings through words? In a way this is what Jeje has to figure out now his telepathic connection is damaged.

I loved that the elder dragon had a natural solution to Jae's problems, one that scientific medicine couldn't figure out.

[minesomine]

Sex should be more intense for Linked Ones, I'm sure. Telepathic links should be an interesting thing with sex, actually being able to read and know if the other person likes something you did and know what else they want you to do. .. Oh, the possibilities. ;)

The telepathic link the way I try to write it is not smth permanent and ever present. You can shield yourself away from the other person. You can also sometimes share smth you wanted private.
It's more a way of talking and sensing emotions than actually invading privacy (other than the occasional slip up). It does mean that a lot may end up implied and not actually in the open... thinking that things don't need to be said out loud...
It makes for very different dynamics at play here:
-Junsu has telepathy but he can't use it with Sarah...
-Lydia and Jae started with telepathy but now will have to talk,
-Max and Chun have telepathy but there's Max's personality to consider...
-Jae and Yun need to talk but are not yet ready.

Lots of meaty chunks to keep me entertained. I kinda wish I had better skills with words to make that conflict more alive.

Ah, the dragons. Ever surprising. This ancient one is just candy treat.

[chihana11]

The beautiful thing about telepathy is knowing how your partner feels. I remember so many times in relationships when words would get in the way or when I couldn't explain why something bothered me in words. If you could just show your feelings to other person! It would be wonderful.

It is a bit of angst for Yunjae, Lydia seems really kind and caring. If she is a big yunjae shipper then maybe a threesome is on it's way? ;) Just teasing you.

I think you have good skills with words and this world is really alive and so interesting. It's just different enough but still believable. Thank you for writing.

[minesomine]

I have a habit of becoming mute in moments when I really need to express myself...
Oh, well...

Threesome? Maybe yes, maybe not. /laughs/

Thanks. It's just that with my own writing I always find faults. It shows up as emotions/images/loose sentences in my head and when I put it into words sometimes it's like I can't fully express it or it changes into smth slightly different. The comments for this fic surprise me often. People seem to respond very well to it.

[chihana11]

It is a really good fic. I think you have a knack for sci fi.

[minesomine]

Thanks, darling. I love sci-fi but I see this as more relationship fic than sci-fi. :)

[minesomine]

Junsu and those thighs... what can I say? And he did put his foot in his mouth and didn't even saw it!

Lydia isn't some mean third party trying to break Yunjae apart. She's sort of a Yunjae shipper. ;)
I'm sure the dragon water has some weird magical powers.

I had wanted to write smth more smuty for Yoomin but went for more implied than anything else. I think that it works anyway, we just know they both love pointing up. ;)