You know

[minesomine]

Length: Drabble, One Shot
Pairing: Yunjae

OBS: This was the first thing I tried writing. I don't know enough about DBSK to elaborate more. so this was all that I got.
I was attempting a first-person account, on a Dear Diary style.

I Know. You Don’t Know.

Mine.
All Mine.
Just Mine.
So Mine.

You know...
Lots of stories have me falling for Yun

Comments

[chihana11]

This really seems so heartfelt.

[minesomine]

Ohhhh, thanks. :)

I got lost for words and couldn't go on. But I did like the idea of this.

[noeldenever]

I...want...more.....
I want it to continue, up to the point where Jae surrender to Yunho's seduction ;;
Oops, sorry..a reader can't be greedy xD
Thx for the drabble ^^

[minesomine]

LOL. Me too.
I sort of got stuck here and was never able to return to it. :(
But I love this idea of Yunho seducing Jaejoong under the disguise of fanservice and regular skinship.

[snow_meow]

I see Yunho in a new light here.
I never thought he could be that cunning and stalking his prey.

To me, that's more Jaejoong's style.

[minesomine]

I know, everyone sees Jae as a sly seducer. It's those eye cats.
But Yunho and that poker face? Come on, how is anyone going to find out what that sneaky one was thinking?

[jaan30]

Cute! I agree Yunho is harder to read, but everyone could see those love stares they gave each other LOL. Yunho's eyes would sparkle, perhaps with a little smirk on that poker face, but Jae's adoration was clearly written all over his face. Gosh those two! Your Jae sounds like he didn't realize his love for Yunho (because why else would he be blushing and have such a reaction to Yunho's touch?) so Yunho had to make the first move. I like it! So Yunho either initiated more because he realized his feelings first and Jae didn't OR your Yunho was really just using Jae's adoration of him to get something. I hope Yunho didn't move on after he got what he wanted though... that would seem rather shallow. In that case I don't think I like your Yunho much LOL! :P The fresh perspective is refreshing either way.^^

[minesomine]

I've seen a lot of yunjae videos on youtube. On some, they totally look like a couple in hiding, with Jae being the one who isn't so good at hiding. But there are others where it's like nothing is happening.
What got me to write this was Jae talking about Yunho hugs, he sounded like a teenage shy girl who just found out boys exist and that they make you feel... things. On occasions Yunho would smile at that, on others it was like Jae was talking about pumpkins, total poker face. And if Jae said that, and Yunho kept hugging the same way...
My idea wasn't a bad Yunho, more like sneaky and sly to get what he wanted, unfortunately for both, when things could start to really get going, life was a bitch and you have to live with your choices and how they affect everything.
Thanks for commenting.

[shinchul303]

"I felt his warmth before I felt his touch…"

Nice. This points to heightened awareness. Which means reciprocal feelings.

[minesomine]

Thank you. Jaejoong did say whatever Yunho was doing worked in the end.