Where were you all my life? 28/?

Feb 25, 2014 03:23

Chapter 28 - More Changes

Summary:
Kim Jaejoong is forced to do business with the mafia who keep threatening him. Changmin, Junsu and Yoochun are responsible for his security.
Jung Yunho is a cop investigating a paedophile/mafia man named Kim Jaejoong and the mafia is blackmailing him to do one job for them: kill Jaejoong.
And so their paths ( Read more... )

violence, yoosu, minjunki, yunjae, smut, fic: where were you, action

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noeldenever February 25 2014, 03:55:36 UTC
Wow, everything is so seriously & royally f***ed up..
And those panic attacks..won't be surprised if Siwon did something terrible to Jaejoong in the past to instill huge fear in him. Or maybe Jaejoong was raped too in his youth? Or whatever crooked plot twist you're cooking up for poor YunJae x)
Thank you for updating daily author-nim, you're really spoiling us your readers ^^

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minesomine February 25 2014, 04:01:31 UTC
Ah, the problem with updating so fast is that now I have to go hurry and write more, lol. But I make no promises of daily updates. It's just that sometimes I write fast. Thank you for following my story.

Yep, everything is a mess but now they are finally working together.
Jae is traumatised, yes. No, nothing happened to him as a child. What else Siwon did to him besides hurt Ren? Hummm....

"whatever crooked plot twist you're cooking" That made me laugh. I will take that as a huge compliment.

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noeldenever February 25 2014, 05:37:41 UTC
Don't worry, update at your own comfortable pace ^^
And yes, that was meant as a compliment <3

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minesomine February 25 2014, 12:10:59 UTC
*bows* Thank you. *huge smile*

Oh, next chapter is yet to be fully written, I only have bits and pieces. So, next update will take a little longer.


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minesomine February 25 2014, 12:28:07 UTC
Yunho was dumb but he can be smart and he is stubborn. Jae is smart, angry and impatient.
Then Jae is a little traumatised but Yunho who should be is kind of not, he's a tough cookie on that aspect.
Yet, tough Jae has cried as much as he needed to, and soon he will be back to kicking ass and making Yunho's heart (or is it smth else?) flutter.

Jun Ki + Changmin, I ship that too, so so so much. Older, mature, calm and always composed Mr. Lee. Then younger, childish, angry and screaming Mr. Shin. Oh, yeahhh, sparks are showing around those two.
When I am writing their little scenes, my face is kind of like Chun in that gif. Yummy. So excited. Gimme more.

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songbird52317 February 25 2014, 05:55:50 UTC
This is so wonderfully convoluted. Hoping for some tender YunJae action at some point. Like how those two get so hot for each other.

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songbird52317 February 25 2014, 05:59:04 UTC
Oh, and I love that picture of Junsu!

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minesomine February 25 2014, 12:19:20 UTC
I look at both these pics of Junsu and I get this urge to bring him home, just with me.


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chihana11 February 26 2014, 03:27:30 UTC
Oh no! You have to share Junsu, I'll let you have JJ. He can be all yours.

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paoktsou February 25 2014, 11:49:30 UTC
Kyaaaaaa update!!!
Oh my junki changmin i ship this
Like a good big family
This is wonderfull
^o^

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minesomine February 25 2014, 12:21:58 UTC
LOL, glad you approve of Jun Ki + Changmin. They are so different, aren't they?
Ah, and it had to be Yunho's dad to get Jun Ki to admit some interest, of course. That man should open a couple's counselling practice.

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ext_1727302 February 25 2014, 13:26:30 UTC
I'm liking jun ki's character a lot , strong , mature and calm lol at changmin and yunho's dad little conversation , yunho's dad should speak more his words are gold
And can't wait for Yunho and jaejoong to start working together and start Knowing each other more (well , after they finally have a proper talk like two normal human beings ) and I hope Yunho will escape changmin's hits from now on though I never really mind it

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minesomine February 25 2014, 13:33:55 UTC
Yunho is no longer hiding anything, so now, if Min tries to hit him, I'm pretty sure Yunho will hit back.
Fights between them, will only take place in the gym from now on. I smell the sweat already.

I had to have someone who never loses his cool in the middle of all these short-tempered guys.
No more roses for Min, poor Minnie. Yunho's dad is awesome.

Yunho and Jae... they will start talking. A little. Very awkwardly. Talk should come before sex, not after. After always makes it soooo awkward.

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ext_1727302 February 25 2014, 14:05:44 UTC
Lol , it is but even if they'll start talking a little now , jaejoong can always talk to yunho's dad xD , and I'm waiting for the hot working out sessions hehe and jaejoong can just stay there and watch

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minesomine February 25 2014, 14:09:56 UTC
Talk about how he sort of you know kind of raped his son? I don't think so.
I'm pretty sure Yunho's dad knows they had sex but does not know exactly the details of how it started.

Working out sessions? Oh, yes. I need to write that. Something very sweaty.

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