Where were you all my life? 22/?

Feb 16, 2014 09:49

Chapter 22 - Ready? Action!

Summary:
Kim Jaejoong owns a construction company and that forces him to do business with the mafia even if he himself tries to remain within the law. However, some of the mafia men don’t appreciate that and keep threatening him. That’s why he hired Changmin, Junsu and Yoochun who are responsible for his security.
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violence, yoosu, minjunki, yunjae, smut, fic: where were you, action

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chihana11 February 16 2014, 21:10:02 UTC
It's going down!
So glad Junsu figured out who Yunho is.
I don't even know what to say about Chun and Minnie.
Those two are lucky to still be alive.

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minesomine February 16 2014, 21:25:19 UTC
Uau! Now that was a marathon! You read everything! *applauds*

Thank you for liking the stories enough to read them (even with the plot point of rape going around) and all the way up to the big action scene.
I tried imagining what to do for this chapter for days, daaaays. Finally this look alike of some cop show scenes just popped in my head and I went with it.
The shit is about to hit the fan! If this chapter was interesting, I have two others even more interesting. In the middle of the big story, I will have to even include some smut just to slow down things, lol.

I visualised this chapter in my head and I was like, can someone film this? Please? With lots of close ups and sounds of shots? Min and Chun plus guns, punches and speeding cars! I want it!

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chihana11 February 17 2014, 01:24:59 UTC
Thank you, it was good to have something to read.
Rape is a common fantasy, it's kinda ruined for me but I am strange and unusual.
Lots of people will love reading this, it's almost like a Kpop police drama!

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minesomine February 17 2014, 01:35:09 UTC
A kpop police drama? Uau! *bows*
Thanks!


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songbird52317 February 17 2014, 02:12:53 UTC
I hope Changmin remembers to report the thug's comment about liking younger males. Wondering also about whether Yunho will get involved in interrogating this guy. Or at least listening in. Really enjoying this. You write so quickly! You must not get distracted like me.

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minesomine February 17 2014, 02:24:58 UTC
Oh, I am writing fast but now I sort of reached the live shoot stage. It took me forever to decide how to do the action scenes to make them sound like action scenes.
I have free time, not working yet. Just studying to finish a certification and reading fics, The mini fic was the fastest, two days and it was done. This one I have to plot what to do next.
There will still be more action coming up. And some sexy time.

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minesomine February 17 2014, 07:59:31 UTC
"Forgot I still had my gun? Go ahead. I’m sort of pissed enough to actually fire."

I did star off that poster with a pissed off looking Min!

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minesomine February 17 2014, 13:35:07 UTC
It looks like he's asking: what the hell is that?
He looks dreamy gorgeous on that gif.

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minesomine August 5 2015, 08:32:23 UTC
Complicated? Nah, things are only just starting to get interesting. ;)

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