Challenge Response: Oktoberfest

Oct 08, 2008 23:08

The Underground Passageway

She dove into the hollow of a large tree. The blood from her arm dripped, blending with the red, orange, and yellow of the leaves on the ground. She had felt the bullet pass through cleanly, missing bone. Her former employers were in pursuit.

She had been warned not to deal with humans. But with her people’s land ( Read more... )

fantasy, flash fiction, cotidiana, challenge

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redvelvetcanopy October 9 2008, 18:06:46 UTC
It's impressive how much world-building you've accomplished in so short a piece. I love the idea that there are humans willing to go against the grain to protect the werewolves. I'll look carefully around the woods at the next full moon!

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cotidiana October 10 2008, 00:08:59 UTC
There are humans willing to go against the grain to do the right thing. They may be a minority, but they exist. That's the hope I live by. Thank you for your nice comment.

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redvelvetcanopy October 10 2008, 01:12:54 UTC
There are humans willing to go against the grain to do the right thing. They may be a minority, but they exist. Wow, what a statement! I'd like to think I'm one of these people, on many levels.

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cotidiana October 10 2008, 14:50:06 UTC
Funny I didn't notice the cynicism in my statement. Here I thought I was being optimistic by saying they exist. Glass half full, half empty. *half smiles*

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