Soliloquy (fic)

[mimiheart]

Fic: Soliloquy
Rated: PG
Summary: Snape is asked a question. HBP spoilers
Beta'd by Hobbit_Tabby and goes along with the picture I just posted, though either could stand alone.

Comments

[anonymous]

You could easily add a line or two about how his lover might/might not appreciate his need for solitude because...& fill in a brief detail of how "he" was never left alone by his zealous Gryffindor friends/was neglected by his relatives-something like that. You wouldn't need to use any names, but it would be more clear that it was Severus/Harry, if you wanted.

[dragon_279]

or it could just have ...

"Severus, I would never dream of interrupting your bath."

"Then yes. Yes, I will marry you, Harry."

:)

[mimiheart]

I know I *could* and I thought of it. But I like the ambiguity of it currently. I know if I had gone through the entire fic and then at the end someone sprung on me that it was someone other than who I was thinking of, it would bug me. Thank you for reading!

[dragon_279]

My comment was simply to show that it didn't have to be any more lines put in the try to hint to the character as one person commented :)

But i do like your story as is and yes, readers can decide for themselves who the person is, and i have actually had stories that i have spent thinking it is someone else and it turns out to be this person. And it does somehow spoil the effect.

Cheers

[dragon_279]

Oh and BTW...your icon is so cool!

[mimiheart]

lol thanks