Seventeen Steps (7/?)

Nov 25, 2009 18:45

Title: Seventeen Steps (7/?)
Author: millionstar
Pairing: Belldom (AU)
Rating: Will vary, this chapter: NC-17
Warnings: None
Beta: My Random Chants Selection, ophelia1971 &hearts
Summary: Matthew is intrigued by his newest neighbor.
Feedback: Would be lovely, if you are so inclined.
Disclaimer: I don't own Muse; the following is pure fiction.

Author's Note: ( Read more... )

fic: seventeen steps, slash, pairing: matthew/dominic, fic

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stefanyeah November 26 2009, 00:12:50 UTC
If that's how they have alonesexytime, how will they have togethersexytime?
This is good stuff. :O

Edit: Nova was, unless he was quite mistaken, watching him.
Love that fish. She's such a lucky girl, too, isn't she? And Matthew, I bet she loves to watch you, don't cover her up.

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millionstar November 28 2009, 00:05:12 UTC
*bows deeply* Pleased you liked it. Just call me D, ticker of boxes. ;p

Nova is indeed a lucky, lucky girl, I'd trade places with that fish anyday.

If I could swim. :/

Thank you Stef. &hearts

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stefanyeah November 28 2009, 00:54:06 UTC
Heehee, You can tick my boxes anytime. God, you didn't even go towards my usual boxes. :p

You can't swim? :O

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millionstar November 28 2009, 02:58:55 UTC
Never learned. Am terrified of water. *hides*

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eskarlata November 26 2009, 00:22:37 UTC
fdjñfiueriosdklfjdioeurflskdjfidofuioefks!!!!!!

um, yeah.

well done.

*dies*

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millionstar November 28 2009, 01:05:45 UTC
Thank you. :-)

xxx

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___orange November 26 2009, 00:42:06 UTC
I know this will be an odd comment, but I noticed the photos you use for your journal headers - they're just my absolute favorite photos of Matthew.

I liked the one you had with him feeding the ducks so much I was going to e-mail you, and ask you how to do the same thing - only I wanted the photo you're using above! :)

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millionstar November 26 2009, 00:44:50 UTC
Will PM you. :)

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stockholmbabyx November 26 2009, 00:56:51 UTC
KAHFLHFO:WIEHGLSKDHFKLS

Ummm, no words yet. Hold on.

. . okay, composed.

Basically-- HOLYMOTHEROFGOD! The way it was written, with the dual viewpoints, was just a fantastic thing. It really made the chapter that much better.

And the fact that they're both that into each other already, with such an explosive connection? Jesus, D! Way to try and kill a woman bring out the passion in a story! Each sex scene (especially Dom's, because I mean fucking WOW & I totally have a mirror/reflection fetish) was fantastic, excellent, brilliant and a thousand other adjectives that are all relative to 'amazing.' I love that they're building up and becoming something together that doesn't need to be said; unspoken love is <3

This was so, so, soooooo good to read after a shit day.
Thank you and I can't wait to read more!

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millionstar November 28 2009, 01:19:01 UTC
Aww, thank you Taylor. :)

I'd never tried writing from dual viewpoints before - I'm happy you liked it! You are very welcome, hon.

xxx

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hullabalo_o November 26 2009, 01:16:34 UTC
i've only read this so far

but GUH WOMAN <3 i loved it

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millionstar November 28 2009, 01:24:52 UTC
;-)

Thank you, hon!

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hullabalo_o November 28 2009, 20:58:34 UTC
your welcome pet :D

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