Title: Seventeen Steps (7/?)
Author:
millionstarPairing: Belldom (AU)
Rating: Will vary, this chapter: NC-17
Warnings: None
Beta: My Random Chants Selection,
ophelia1971 &hearts
Summary: Matthew is intrigued by his newest neighbor.
Feedback: Would be lovely, if you are so inclined.
Disclaimer: I don't own Muse; the following is pure fiction.
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This is good stuff. :O
Edit: Nova was, unless he was quite mistaken, watching him.
Love that fish. She's such a lucky girl, too, isn't she? And Matthew, I bet she loves to watch you, don't cover her up.
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Nova is indeed a lucky, lucky girl, I'd trade places with that fish anyday.
If I could swim. :/
Thank you Stef. &hearts
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You can't swim? :O
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um, yeah.
well done.
*dies*
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xxx
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I liked the one you had with him feeding the ducks so much I was going to e-mail you, and ask you how to do the same thing - only I wanted the photo you're using above! :)
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Ummm, no words yet. Hold on.
. . okay, composed.
Basically-- HOLYMOTHEROFGOD! The way it was written, with the dual viewpoints, was just a fantastic thing. It really made the chapter that much better.
And the fact that they're both that into each other already, with such an explosive connection? Jesus, D! Way to try and kill a woman bring out the passion in a story! Each sex scene (especially Dom's, because I mean fucking WOW & I totally have a mirror/reflection fetish) was fantastic, excellent, brilliant and a thousand other adjectives that are all relative to 'amazing.' I love that they're building up and becoming something together that doesn't need to be said; unspoken love is <3
This was so, so, soooooo good to read after a shit day.
Thank you and I can't wait to read more!
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I'd never tried writing from dual viewpoints before - I'm happy you liked it! You are very welcome, hon.
xxx
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but GUH WOMAN <3 i loved it
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Thank you, hon!
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