Untitled chapter 1

[millerxgoose]

This is written in Derek’s Point of View so I hope you guys like it.

Pairing: Paul GaustadxDerek Roy

Title: Untitled
Rating: G
Pairing: Paul Gaustad/Derek Roy (buffalo Sabres)
Disclaimer: I do not own the sabres or these two

Why did he have to keep doing this to me? I mean really, going off and not seeing him for the longest times. It just hurt my

Comments

[dragonblk17]

I love the brotherly relationship that Andrew and Derek seem to have in real life. You showed it well in this fic so far. :D

[z4rf3]

I like the playful banter you wrote for Andrew and Derek :D I always pictured them kinda brotherly. Peters always keeping the normally head in the clouds Roy down to earth. I think you captured that well with Andrew kinda seeing through Derek's nonchalant attitude.

Also, I think you're right to portray Goose as the kind of guy to wear his emotions on his sleeves. He just seems to scream "Look! I'm in a bad mood!" or an other emotion you feel like inserting :D

The only thing I'd like to point out is that Roy's interaction with Lindy and the following parts were a little hard to understand. I reread it a few times, but it still seems little jumpy in there. Besides that, absolutely superb, and can;t wait until the next part!

Yay for Peters reaming Goose a new one for making Royzie worry! :D

[millerxgoose]

-rereads- yeah that part with ruff was a bit jumpy but it doe snot help where I fear Ruff myself xD

I always though Andrew and Derek had a nice relationship going on but never noticed how brotherly I made them. And thanks.

I always thought that as well. Whenever I have seen him on the ice or out and about. He was never afraid to show how he was truly feeling.

*gasp* HOW DID YOU KNOW ANDREW DID THAT??!! omg it must be so easy to read what happen behind the scene.

[z4rf3]

Ruff is kinda a scary guy, I'll give you that, but the practices I've seen him at he also seems like he can be a boat load of fun :D I kinda imagine his to be like a father. Strict when he needs to be, but willing to loosen up when things are going smoothly.

And I kinda had a feeling Ol' Peaty did that because, well, I guess that's just how his personality is! Kinda tough, and brash, and unwilling to ask permission xD He sees what's up and he's gunna fix it come hell or high water kinda thing haha. Always looking out for little Royzie!

[millerxgoose]

Yeah he is kinda scary. But that never means he can't be 'cruel' and that when someone is messing up or their heart is not into it.

X3 yes yes Petey is always like that. And yet Derek will say he won't need to be looked after.