the lonesome era

[milktour]

whee old WIP i gave up on, now it is here

the lonesome era
jonghyun/key, pg, aroound 700 words i think

Comments

[followtheleadah]

;____;
I love it. I really do. <3

Good job. <3

[milktour]

thank you! ♥

[xxlexandrosxx]

Oh wow.. most of the time I'm not good with heavy fics with a deeper meaning but this.. really, I love it

Kibum calls him 'Jonghyun'. Double syllables takes more effort, but it's easier on his heart.
My favourite line, it's so beautifully written <3

so sad.. T_T

[milktour]

aa thankyou! i appreciate it :D

[tsme89]

dlfkj. It feels incomplete because none of them had closure. Still, the "but it's easier on his heart" line got me.

[milktour]

what are a closure aharhar

thank you for reading! ♥

[ajin]

This is really simple and the idea might have been re-used thousands of times before BUT you made it unique. It's so amazingly bitter-sweet. I liked it enough to actually want to leave a comment.
Thanx a lot for sharing this ;~;

[putlitz]

yees drunk fic! i wanted to write a cliche \o/ and np, thank you so much for reading! ♥

[eoryndal]

Wow, this is one of the best future/past breakup-things I've ever read! I like that you're realistic (for example, not making Taemin and Key into some sort of super choreographers). You express so much in just ~700 words. I love the different layers of emotions between Jonghyun and Key, like the happiness and sadness, the hidden pain, the memories, the caring...

[putlitz]

uguu thankyou! when i was writing this way back i remember being worried about how much i could actually get away with saying by not saying... if that even makes sense... so your comment makes me v happy \o/