AGFA Chapter 2

Feb 06, 2008 08:47


Title: A Gift from Above
Author: Milena D.
Rating: T for now
Genre: Romance/Action/Adventure, etc. Daniel/Vala all the way ;)
SPOILERS: HUGE SPOILERS FOR DOMINION!!!

Summary: Something went wrong and they’ve paid for it.

Author’s Note: Hi everyone! I’ve had this chapter written for awhile but it needed MAJOR tweaking before I could post. I want to thank ( Read more... )

[fics: sg-1] daniel/vala

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natalia5345 February 6 2008, 14:36:02 UTC
Ok i'm just telling you again that I love where this is going. we have discussed my love for this already and the frustration it brings me - which means you need to write moooooooooooore :D and then my frustration will cease :D

Love love love - so glad you're writing again :D

nat

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milena_d February 6 2008, 16:17:47 UTC
LoL! I'm sorry for the frustrations (though they were intentional ^_~) but I'm so happy that you liked this chapter! I will definitely write more since my muse is harping for this fic, as soon as I turn in my assignment...late :P

Thanks for the review Nat! ^_^_^

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natalia5345 October 3 2010, 00:46:56 UTC
Well at least my frustrations will be calmed once I finish this. since you've been torturing me for SO LONG.

May I just say I adore the awesomeness of Nejaya?

“You sent the other girls to search for the cookies in the guest bedrooms.” Teal’c stated. Nejaya turned her head again but slowly this time and with gleeful eyes.

“If they came with me, I’d have to share.” she answered him as if it were the simplest thing in the world.

bahaha insert comment about apples and trees here *snort*

onwards I go!

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Review from acer-sigma anonymous February 6 2008, 22:10:48 UTC
Oh thank goodness you're alright. hope everything is getting back to normal for you.

Anyways, nice mystery filled chapter. You've got people who not only seem to know about the Tau'ri and there need to meddle, but more specifically, they seem to have some sort of knowledge of SG-1 and whatever it is, is making them nervous. And to top things off, there seem to be quite a few kids running around that reminds them of Vala, especially Nejaya. I'm almost tempted to lean towards the idea that a cloning experiment with Vala has gone wrong and resulted in miniature versions of her running around. It's all very strange indeed.

Still if its not a bunch of Vala clones, and if Nejaya's mother is who I think it might be, than it looks like Vala might have made a life for herself outside of the SGC.

In any event, a lot of questions. Looking forward to seeing the answers, not to mention any surprised reactions that'll probably come up if anyone catches Daniel watching that dvd of Vala.

acer-sigma

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Re: Review from acer-sigma milena_d February 8 2008, 21:42:30 UTC
Hey Acer! Yeah, I'm alright if a little frazzled ^_~

I'm glad you liked the chapter and you're right to think there's something deeper going on here but what that is...well you'll just have to read the next chapters. ^_^

Oh and the DVD thing is a misunderstanding :P In Chapter 1 I thought I'd written that he left the DVD in his Laptop driver and packed that with his gear but I went back and saw that I'd written it pretty ambiguously, I'll have to put in an A/N in the next chapter. ^_^

Thanks for reviewing!

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hariboo February 8 2008, 02:44:23 UTC
Okay, I love this kid. and daughter of my wife’s friend... you tease. It's like I know, but knowing you and your ways, I might not actually know. Still, you tease.

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milena_d February 8 2008, 21:56:32 UTC
LoL, exactly, you hit it right on the nail!! And what do I mean by that? Well...next chapter coming soon ^_~

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hariboo February 8 2008, 22:01:55 UTC
See even now I think I get it but it probably just you trying to mess me up. You tease.

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scifi_tv_addict February 8 2008, 04:38:26 UTC
How dare you tease us like that!! Why do I get the feeling you're going to take months to write a follow-up to this chapter. Meanwhile, I'll be sitting here tapping my foot until then. That's a lot of tapping, you know!

Sooo....I expect another great chapter soon...and the quality better be as good as these previous two, no slacking off now ;)

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milena_d February 8 2008, 21:58:25 UTC
LoL, no no!! Well I don't mean to! And I'm all pepped after this chapter PLUS, I've completely forgotten my school schedule so I won't be bothered by those pesky due-dates ^_~

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anonymous May 8 2008, 12:06:22 UTC
Can't believe it's been so long since i read this, please tell me were going to get an update soon.

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milena_d June 9 2008, 12:06:36 UTC
Definitely will! ^_^ I'm currently writing for Being Found but I'll be getting in some AGFA chapters very soon if all goes well! Sorry to make you wait :(

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