The Auld Lang Slam: Rating and Critique Thread

Dec 31, 2010 09:31



Sorry, a bit late - I slept in a bit! All critiques and ratings must be in by noon tomorrow. Everyone who submitted a story must rate and critique.

Please make sure every story is rated out of 10 and ranked!

challenge: slam fic

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office_bluth January 1 2011, 08:46:13 UTC
In Parts by dr_agent
I looooooved this interpretation of the prompt. I thought of a few different versions of the word "resolution," and never came close to this. Such an interesting concept, and executed brilliantly. It's a beautiful exploration of Jeff's feelings for Annie and even Britta. So, so, so well done. 9.5

new year's resolutions are hard to keep by greta_garbo
I loved the progression of Jeff and Annie's relationship. I loved their respective resolutions, and how the other person kind of got in the way of keeping them. She used Abed and Britta excellently, more as voices of reason rather than guides or guardian angels, which is done fairly often. 9

Six Glasses of Champagne by wordybee
I loved their discussion about resolutions, and the kind-of-but-not-really flirting Jeff and Annie were doing. It seemed like a cute moment that was very Jeff and Annie. 8.5

Hands Down by Chrisfaithalin
Okay, first time at smut...really, really good. I loved the concept of their secret relationship, and it seemed grounded in the timeline of the show, what with the references to episodes 8, 9, and 11. Something about the characterization seemed a bit off - Jeff provided a lot of exposition, explaining things that could have been mentioned somewhere else. But I loved their relationship in it, and again: that smut? Dang, yo. 8

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