There's Only One Girl In the World For You (46/?)

[lapacifidora]

Title: There’s only one girl in the world for you (46/?)

Author: lapacifidora

Spoilers: Season 1 and into an AU Season 2

Rating/ Warnings: PG-13, for the time being

Word Count: 3,011

Disclaimers: Not mine. Although I think Dan Harmon knows this friend of mine and based Troy on her… The title comes from a Wreckless Eric song.

Author’s note: This is for shan21non

Comments

[lapacifidora]

which I realized I should fix

With AllCAPS? Awesome: I'm down with it. :)

I feel like it should be noted that I get some sad, crazy amount of joy any time I see a new chapter to this story.

Aww: No matter who tells me that, it makes me happy to hear it. Mostly because I sit alone at night and giggle at what I write, and then I wonder if I'm going quietly mad.

Here's hoping Jeff listens to Abed eventually, especially since it's pretty clear the connection is still there - not that I ever doubted that, of course.

Oh, Abed has a plan. He's had a plan for abou the last 10 chapters, once he understood where I was going with this story. And, yes, I know I sound like a nutter that I discuss the plot of my fic with the Abed in my head. :::goes to corner in shame:::

And LMFAO the ending made me laugh more than it probably should have, idk. I WOULD ENJOY THIS DINNER, NGL.

I totes forgot to include a link for the trailer for this dinner show, but I'll do it in the next chapter. It's bizarre.

Thanks :D

your back

[midtega]

Horray. Your back and the new chapter. I was getting a little worried, but hey stories take time from one writer to another. I know off topic here, but what are your thoughts from tonights episode was that the image of angry jeff and annie you trying to convey when you wrote the confrontation. Also, aren't you glad there was a legitimate jeff/annie moment. I mean a stare down that leads to a strip. Bet you weren 't thinking of that. Sorry for the off topic its just I think its been a good day for the milady milord fandom.

Re: your back

[lapacifidora]

I never really went anywhere: I was here on my little end of the Interwebs, typing away and then deleting stuff and then retyping it so it made more sense. But: Thank you :D

tonights episode was that the image of angry jeff and annie you trying to convey when you wrote the confrontation.

Yeah: That's sort of what I was imagining. (I see you, Dan Harmon! No, I kid. I doubt anyone from the show pays attention to this fic, other than to say, 'Did you see some crazy person has written like a 60 chapter fan fic? We're only a half hour show!' And: Tangent done.) Mainly, I was working off the Angry!Jeff from English as a Second Language, but also the crazy Annie brought when she stormed out of the study room after he yelled at her.

Also, aren't you glad there was a legitimate jeff/annie moment. I mean a stare down that leads to a strip.IKR?! I was so super excited when they started shucking their clothes: It's probably not a good reflection on my character. But: Yes, totally and completely and hilariously awesome

[eleventhimpala]

I really like this, and I'm glad that Abed managed to talk some sense into Jeff.

[lapacifidora]

Thank you :D

I'm glad that Abed managed to talk some sense into Jeff.

Abed's certainly trying, although clearly Jeff is all mopey and stuff. But like I told thetidebreaks, Abed has a master plan to fix things.

[amtrak12]

Nope that definitely wasn't too meta or annoying. :) It was just Abed. I liked his whole exchange with Jeff. And I like the study group's frustration with the trip so far. I get the feeling I'd end up being disappointed by Niagara Falls too. :/ And I too, was LOL-ing at the ending. I LOVE SHIRLEY! :D

Finally: Yay new chapter! I hope the rest of them are easier for you to write. :)

(breaking out my finale kiss icon because I am still on a J/A high [and general Community high] after that ep)

[lapacifidora]

Good: I was worried that even the other characters would be like, 'dude. We get it.'

And I like the study group's frustration with the trip so far. I get the feeling I'd end up being disappointed by Niagara Falls too.

It's not the greatest trip ever, but then that's what most family vacations are like, right? Niagara is beautiful, but it's insanely crowded, even on weekdays.

And I too, was LOL-ing at the ending. I LOVE SHIRLEY! :D

I was terrified of writing her any real dialogue, oh, like 30 chapters ago, but she's grown on me. (Not like a fungus.)

I hope the rest of the story is easier to write. I think my brain is still like, "WHY? Why did you make them fight? They could be being adorable & snuggly & sexy *right* *Now.*" Which is weird, because, obviously I know why I had them fight. My brain is sometimes a weird place to be.

[ravenecho]

I really liked this chapter, despite how difficult it was for you to write.

I thought you had Abed and his "meta-ness" down perfectly and it wasn't over the top or OC and I loved his little chat with Jeff, twas great.

Also, I loved the little moment between Jeff and Annie after she nearly slipped over on the ice and he caught her. It was nice to see them getting slowly back on track, so to speak, after their epic fight.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter and I hope it is easier to write!

[lapacifidora]

I really like your bouncy elephant icon, despite how random and unexplained it is. :P

I'm glad Abed's "meta-ness" wasn't over the top. I wasn't sure if it was just going to be too much of a good thing.

Also, I loved the little moment between Jeff and Annie after she nearly slipped over on the ice and he caught her. It was nice to see them getting slowly back on track, so to speak, after their epic fight.

They have an undeniable connection, but they're angry with each other at the moment. So, a little more on track than just not talking.

I hope it's easier to write, too. It really sucks not being able to get this thing done.

[ravenecho]

The bouncy elephant icon has been getting a lot of love these last couple of days, people can't get enough of it.

[lapacifidora]

I can understand that: The bouncy elephant is so hilariously absurd. But given what we now know about trampolines, I have to wonder if the bouncy elephant is racist.