[Fic] A Lesson in Humility - PoT, Shishido & Ohtori

Feb 17, 2007 22:34

This is an idea I'd been hanging onto 'just in case' for a request fic, but I finally decided to just write it anyway. So *gasp* here's a Silver Pair fic that's not dedicated to anyone or for any special occassion (since I didn't quite finish it by Ohtori's b-day and it wasn't set anywhere near V-day anyway ( Read more... )

character: shishido ryou, character: ohtori choutarou, fandom: hyoutei, fandom: prince of tennis

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keight_michelle February 18 2007, 07:07:01 UTC
Yay~! Another SP fic from you! ♥♥♥

I really love the way you write especially during the match.. It was, like, I could actually see them playing and beating the shit out of those 2 jerks. XD.. And I love your Choutarou.. ^_____________^

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miko_no_da February 18 2007, 17:33:36 UTC
Thank you! I like writing the matches, though I'm having a harder and harder time finding new and interesting ways to describe them. I have total sympathy for all the insane special moves the tenipuri characters use - otherwise it would have been impossible for Konomi to keep the matches interesting. *grins*

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chichiri_no_da February 18 2007, 07:19:18 UTC
*squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee* this was cute ^________^ Go Silver Pair!

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miko_no_da February 18 2007, 17:33:52 UTC
*glomps you and molests your icon*

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vintersaga February 18 2007, 08:03:01 UTC
Goooo Choutarou! I have this ridiculous smile on my face right now. :DD

Loved Choutarou, loved the match, loved Choutarou, and loved Shishido! ^__^

Between these two and Shishido, he was going to end up developing a reputation for knocking arrogant upperclassmen down to size.
*nods head* Yup, Choutarou's no pushover. :D

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miko_no_da February 18 2007, 17:34:23 UTC
Definitely not. Ohtori's got a lot more backbone than most people give him credit for. That's why I love him so. ^_^

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setra February 18 2007, 08:33:45 UTC
*sparkles*
Wow... that was so awesome. And so very appropriate. The balance between them, the flow of the game, and the support of the team. ^___^ This totally made my night. Thank you.

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miko_no_da February 18 2007, 17:34:39 UTC
You're welcome. ^_^ Glad I could entertain.

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cedony February 18 2007, 09:36:33 UTC
This was great. Choutarou was totally hot in this fic, and I loved how they brought the seniors down.

The way that you wrote the match was wonderful, and it was great to actually read about some tennis, and how they worked together, in a Silver Pair fic. ♥

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miko_no_da February 18 2007, 17:36:04 UTC
Putting tennis in my tenipuri fics seems to be becoming a trademark of mine. *laughs* And people always comment how rare it is to see, which amuses me. I mean, we're writing about tennis players!

On the other hand, I suppose not all authors are quite crazy enough to go take a year of tennis lessons just to be able to understand the game well enough to write it. But it was fun. *grins*

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