[Fic] By Any Other Name - PoT, Tori/Shishi, 2/2
Damn LJ character limits. This isn't two chapters, it's meant to be read all at once, but I was forced to break it up to post it. And yes, you read the pairing order correctly. This is partly a belated Xmas fic for sharona1x2, and partly an attempt to see if I can actually write Ohtori/Shishido instead of the other way around. It may well end up serving as
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And now that I am coherent enough, I'm commenting.
I have to say that I really love the idea that you came up with. For a moment all that I could think about when I started was that Choutarou was going to be seme. But then I started to actually read and the plot was just....wow! I realyl like the way that they met on the plane and the only one that knew anything was Choutarou, who now goes by the coolest name ever, Shouichi.
The way that you described Choutarou and how he felt as he saw Shishido for the first time in years was wonderful. And also that you made him scared of flying so that that would hide what he was really feeling while listening to Shishido. And I also thought that it was really good the way that you changed Shishido, so that it seemed like he really did grow up and become diffrent instead of just staying the same that he had been when he was younger.
And when Shishido found the picture....just a wonderful scene. Just imaginging them yelling at each other while trying to get to the explination of how that all happened. Plain wonderful.
And the sex scene. It has to be one of the best I've read in a while. Not to descriptive about what's happening physically, but emotionally what Choutarou was going through. It was just beautiful. To see how he was finally able to let himself relax and let all that tension out of him. And it was just so cute how when he finally came to, he was crying. Too bad Shishido wasn't, but I have to believe that he meant it when he said that if Choutaoru hadn't beat him to it, he would've been crying too.
I can seriously say that you have come up with such a wonderful idea. And maybe we can see what happens later with Shishido and Shouichi? ^_^
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