Simple Past -- 2/2

Jul 23, 2010 00:30

Disclaimer: I definitely DO NOT own Dean Winchester (and I thank every God (pagan or Christian) I know for that!) and everything you might recognize from the show does not belong to me but to somebody else.

Episode-tag to Swan Song.

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borgmama1of5 July 22 2010, 23:50:34 UTC
Oh god, what a powerful set of codas...Had my bawling my eyes out by the end.

And this explains it all, and leaves a tiny space for hope:
"I'm sorry, I shouldn't have done that and that's why I can't just… put it back on, just like that, I have to make sure I forgive myself first…"

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mikiya2200 July 25 2010, 18:13:31 UTC
Thank you so much! It wasn't easy to write them, especially Dean's realization about being the last Winchester alive had me stopping for a moment before I could continue writing. I've read so many stories about how Dean just takes the amulet back and I just couldn't see that. I'm very glad you liked it! :)

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etoile444 July 23 2010, 00:51:05 UTC
That's some powerful stuff you wrote there..especially the second part. I love how Dean was addressing Sam even though only his spirit remains in the car.

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mikiya2200 July 25 2010, 18:15:07 UTC
At the beginning I wasn't so sure if Dean was talking to the car or to Sam (or even to himself), but then it became very clear. Wasn't easy to write the second part so I am REALLY glad you liked it! Thanks a lot!

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arliss July 23 2010, 19:00:35 UTC
I don't think we're ever going to get this sort of resolution on the show. But if we did, this would be a wonderful way to do it. Thanks for this.

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mikiya2200 July 25 2010, 18:16:35 UTC
That's one of the problems I have with the show atm, nothing gets resolved, they leave too many things open and unresolved. So I just had to write this. Thank you for your words, I'm really glad you like it! :)

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