Nov 12, 2001 22:43
Well here's a new song i've written. Someone tell me if it's good or not. I'll put up an mp3 of it somewhere as soon as I can find somewhere to put it =)
New Song (written 09/11/01)
A night on the kerb outside your house (the rain pours down). It drenches you and me: my brand new shirt, your favourite skirt. And the rain runs now in five rivers. I give you my coat - you smile(I shiver).
You've lost me.
You never found out what I'm looking for(It's not in you). You're too weak to end this now.
Why can't you just try to find a way to say, "i've gotta go"? I know that I can't stay another tomorrow.
You've lost me.
And now that it's over there is nothing...there's nothing left. I don't even have a picture, why can't I just forget that you loved me?
If I'd only kept you near
If I'd only asked for more
If I'd only lost you before...you lost yourself