[Fanfic] A Beautiful Mess (Chapter Two)

[mikaa22]

Finally! An update on A Beautiful Mess! ^^ If you guys didn't notice, I intend to make every chapters of this fic longer than my usual fics that's why it always took me time to do an update.

Like what I said in the last update of Out Of My League, I did a banner on this fic and here it is! :)

Comments

[laurene123]

first! :) i really loved this part

" Jun’s eyes got bigger, Aiba covers both his hand on his mouth, Sho’s jaw is hanging, Ohno eyes is pretending to roam around the corridor and Nino tilt his head to see what caused his members to give such reaction."

can totally imagine the five of them being scandalized with what they just saw. its soooo cutie. and nino's such a brat in this chapter. he should learn that he can't get everyone.

will wait for the next update! ♥

[mikaa22]

You're really fast!! ^_^

I know~! I can picture it clearly in my head. Their shocked expressions~! Haha! :)) Bratty Nino in action! ^^ I hope the Yoochun-filled chapter didnt disappoint you. :))

Thanks for reading! I will update soon! ^^

[jmonogatari]

AH you beat me again! LOL XD

Nice chapter btw :) Can't wait for next update!
Nino is such a brat btw XP And Jun is such a gentleman as expected!

PS: Sorry for not commenting much with your other fics, I've read them through my mobile when I was out of town and now that I am back I can't keep up with which one to comment on! Just to let you know I am keep reading all of them and waiting for updates! :)

[mikaa22]

LOL! She's fast! ^^

Thanks! I will update soon~! :)

PS: It's fine~! Now I can't wait for your update too~! :))

[raene_9]

wow! nice chap...now i can even wait for the next one... :)

[mikaa22]

Ohhh~! It's the first time I saw you comment in this fic! :))

Thanks for reading! Until the next one! ^^

[machomiya]

wow can't wait to the next chapter of JUN & YANA, i'm curious how can they get closer.. sankyu^^

[mikaa22]

That icon~!! *dies*

You'll see how in the next chapter~! I'm getting excited too~! Hehe!

You're welcome and thanks too~! ^^

[machomiya]

yes, i die a million times seeing my icon *xd..sure i'll be waiting for the next chapter.. ganbaree!!!

[yume_forever]

Just read both chapters, I can't wait to see where this story goes next~

I also really like how you include so many characters (especially the mix of Arashi and DBSK ^^)!

[mikaa22]

Oh, hi there~! :) Nice to meet you! ^^

I'm a bit skeptic about including many characters, especially the crossover (Arashi X DBSK) but it was received well so I'm happy! :)

Jin, Pi & Ryo haven't appeared yet although Ryo have been mentioned a lot. Oguri Shun and his gf Yamada Yu haven't appeared also, so there's still a lot to introduced.

Arashi and DBSK are basically my bias group in both fandoms! :))

Thank you for reading and I hope to see you in the next update! ^^

[andreja1989]

hahaha that was amusing :) especially the members teasing Nino and the scene haha
anyway I look forward to the new chapter :)

[mikaa22]

Haha! THE SCENE! Such scandalous scene it is~! :DD
Bratty Nino is everywhere in this chapter! Haha. I feel sorry for him after writing this. LOL. ^^

Yep! Will update soon and thank you for reading!^^