[Fanfic] We'll Always Have Paris - Chapter Sixteen: A Tearful Reunion

[mikaa22]

I'm back from my short vacation and I bring you chapter 16. :D

I can describe this chapter in one word: Intense. :))) Hope you'll like it and let me hear what you have to say! :D

As always, this is unbeta-ed so tell me if there are any errors or mistakes. Comments, suggestions, reactions and criticisms are gladly welcomed. Happy reading! :)

Comments

[janinebr]

ahhhh Sho that was not nice .. we all can feel that he felt betrayed .. but the girl just lost her mother she needs somebody to confort her and donß´t make another scene ... short temper Sho is back .. hope he will feel all guilty after some time to thing about what he has done .. tjtjtj .. he kind of broke his promise .. to love her and respect her whatever happens .. i feel bad for sayumi :-( her life is terribel enough right now .. bad sho bad sho .. ( i feel bad for him too .. but ahhh sometimes short temper is not good XD)

[mikaa22]

I couldn't agree more. :D Your comment is spot on. ^^
Anyways, the more drama, more interesting, isn't it? :p
We will see the developments in the coming chapters. Until then!! :D:D

[irnsnchz]

You made me cried. I feel bad for Sayumi because she's experiencing a double pain but I can't blame Sho for walking away from her because he was betrayed. :(( AH~! I don't know what to say anymore. ASDFGJSDSHDJL. :))

[mikaa22]

Both have their owns reasons. Sayumi is protecting him but he doesnt know that. All he knows is that he is betrayed. :(
Until the next update~! :D

[raene_9]

phew! what a way to start to my day! this is so sad...protecting someone is not always that easy & losing someone dear to you is so hard & having someone to share it w/ makes thing a whole better...wish that Sho would realized how much pain Sophie/Sayumi is going through right now. she don't want to betray him if only she have a choice... :(
loved how Jun & Nino supported him... ;)
thanks Mikaa

[mikaa22]

I tell you, this is only the start. There's more to come. ;)
We all know how Sho can be quick-tempered. With all the revelations, he kind of disregarded Sayumi's pain because he's suffering from his own...

You're welcome! Until the next! :D

[arasukishi]

Ahhh! I love Sho's reaction to everything! How - just as he's there, he's there!, talking to Satsuki he changes his mind! How he still thanks MatsuJun for being concerned. I love it!! I love it!!

How are they gonna be together now?!?!?

[mikaa22]

I'm glad you loved it!! XD

Actually, Sho changed his mind when Jun said "You’re not this desperate for a girl who lied straight to your face, are you?" :D :D :D

We'll see in the future chapters. :p Until the next one!

[lildaisy06]

oh dear the heart breaks, the tears. i can't i just can't..... now i need to go read the next chap