[Fanfic] A Beautiful Mess (Chapter Nineteen)

[mikaa22]

This took quite a while, seeing that the last two weeks' pace is a bit faster. I realize that this fic is the longest one I've written so far, (counting the ones I wrote in the past with another fandom) and I am still in the middle part of the story. I will try to fit everything until chapter 30 I guess but not more than 35. :D And I will try to

Comments

[raene_9]

hahahaha...a medicine for my colds...and yatta! you granted my request too... :)
Eri is just like Neen, ne... Fuck buddy, booty call, sex friends...LOL
but that girl got a point & she really knows Yana very well...
loved the unwritten understanding among them being so supportive w/ their youngest & their brat. even Ohno is not even sleepy this time. thanks Riida for being such a silent understanding leader & Sakuraiba for trying to lighten the mood. loved the talk too between Jun & Nino. pat Neen for being so supportive to Jun & for being a man accepting his defeat! way to go guys...hope their relationship flourish soon... :)
thanks mikaa! :)

[mikaa22]

You know what, I felt that this chapter is only a filler of the upcoming important chapters so I kinda feel iffy about it. But after I read your comment, I changed my mind. Haha! Thank you for that. :D

You are very much welcome! XD

[jmonogatari]

Hmm.. shower sex.. *dreamy sigh*
LOL
Sometimes scenes that writers imply but didn't write in details kinda enhances reader's imagination more. I love that bit.
You are surely giving me dirty thoughts, girl. LOL
But yeah, Yana loves him, isn't it obvious already? And I love how Nino pointed it out.
And i love how he says "And I’m not that person who spends his nights crying his heart out locking himself inside the house, listening to sappy love songs after being dumped. I accept it, stood up and move on.”
I mean I wish I know him in real life, but i don't so i wouldn't know for sure if he is really like that. but in this fic, i believe he is that kind of person, ya know?

PS: Too many magazine scans posts on my LJ friend that I can't believe I missed your update. I should have my eyes checked XD

[mikaa22]

My personal reason is that I don't want to write a whole new detailed love scene again. LOL.

I am very sorry giving you dirty thoughts. :p But didn't Jun always gives us dirty thoughts? :))))))

I dunno what show is that but there's this one where they are interviewed about their views on love and relationship etc. and Nino said that he gets easily attracted to someone and just by the mere fact that he is, he is already experiencing a relationship with that person. He gives an example about a girl he saw on the train (or is it a bus??). He said that on the entire train/bus ride that they are already getting into a "relationship" and as soon as she got to her destination it's over, something like that. And that's where he said that he moves on quickly. So yeah, that's where I get the idea. :)

[laurene123]

i take back all the things i said before about the lack of yana and jun interaction. This chapter and the one before really makes up for it. ^_^ i'm sooooo happy. i'm smiling while reading this chapter :)

[mikaa22]

Haha! Why thank you. :D Be prepared for more interaction in the coming chapters. *winks*