Comments | mikaa22: [Fanfic] A Beautiful Mess (Chapter Thirteen)

mikaa22

[Fanfic] A Beautiful Mess (Chapter Thirteen)

Oct 21, 2011 16:34

Update, update! I don't know if you guys wanted more of Akanishi Jin in this fic but I figured Yana needs some close friend besides Eri. Someone that she runs to whenever she needed to talk, someone who is not afraid to point out her mistakes and weaknesses and I think I sort of established their close relationship in the past chapters.

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arashi, fanfic - a beautiful mess, original character, matsumoto jun

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laurene123 October 21 2011, 13:11:12 UTC

you updated again! and with jin (don't you just love this guy? ♥) will read now and will be back ASAP! :D

mikaa22 October 21 2011, 13:38:16 UTC

I'll be waiting right here while you read. :)

laurene123 October 21 2011, 13:55:22 UTC

awwww... jin and yana's friendship's really cute. love their interaction together and how they can be so comfortable with each other but i love jun and yana more! around jun, yana's not the crazy party girl anymore but just a quirky sweet one. lol. looking forward on reading more!! :D

mikaa22 October 21 2011, 14:12:21 UTC

I'm glad someone liked Jin being included in this chapter. lol.

Haha. That's true though, she change whenever she talks to Jun. ♥

Thank you for reading! :D

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raene_9 October 21 2011, 13:45:08 UTC

hahaha...sweet! now excited for that breakfast date... :))

mikaa22 October 21 2011, 13:54:38 UTC

Hihi! I know! ♥♥ Thank you for reading! :)

jmonogatari October 21 2011, 16:32:05 UTC

So i had a really really bad day today. And you made it better!

Herbivore Jun is so cute! :D
Carnivore OC is interesting! the gap between this fic and 'like we used to' is quite wide you know, in terms of characterization of the two main characters for one.
And in terms of the world they are living in. your sho fic focused more on closest people around them like family and Arashi.
Whilst yana (since she's outgoing and so is Jun) is like set in the bigger place that is the entertainment world.
I hope I make some sense.

I am such a bad commenter, i know.. I am sorry :(

Looking forward for next update as always!

(in case you didn't recognize me, this is arashixth i just changed my username XD)

mikaa22 October 21 2011, 18:30:09 UTC

Awww. I'm glad that my update made you feel better. :))

Well, the plot of 'Like We Used To' only revolves around Sho and Aki and their past and present and how Sho is the perfect boyfriend who helps her with her family problem, simple as that. (And I kind of rushed finishing that fic because I'm running out of ideas already. lol. Although now I was thinking of doing an epilogue because I feel guilt for rushing such ending.^^)

In this one, it's more...complex. We're already at chapter 13 but there's still more to reveal. I don't want to spoil, so I'll just say that you guys should expect more drama. haha!

Don't be sorry! It's not bad! I actually like reading insights. *winks*

Thank you for reading and commenting as always! XD

PS. Oh, yeah, while stalking your journal for an update, I realize that I have been redirected to a different username. Perfect username BTW, it is really J's story. lol.