Comments | mijmeraar: jiggle the slot with the thing, j/j, R

mijmeraar

jiggle the slot with the thing, j/j, R

Jun 01, 2007 22:55

Title: jiggle the slot with the thing, you’re in.
Pairing: Jared/Jensen [Mike/Tom]
Rating: R [mostly for language]
WC: approx 2,000
AN: oh man, I Googled a lot of objectionable things for this story. It’s really STUPID but I had fun writing it, and I hope you have fun reading it. feedback=love.

( So, yeah, this whole - let’s break into Mikey’s place and steal the Cubans he bought last time he went to Mexico - thing? Definitely Jared’s idea. )

wbrps

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eilan June 1 2007, 13:58:15 UTC

LOL
That was hilarious.. such silly boys!

mijmeraar June 3 2007, 09:24:54 UTC

that they are! thanks for reading :D

2sexyboys June 1 2007, 14:02:37 UTC

OMFG!!! I have busted something...I can't breathe. That was so friggin' hilarious!! Thank you LOL

mijmeraar June 3 2007, 09:25:34 UTC

haha, i'm so glad that it WAS fnny and not just my whacked out brain. thank you for reading, i'm glad you liked it!

2sexyboys June 3 2007, 09:28:46 UTC

Do more like and I am your slave forever...I am still laughing

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mijmeraar June 3 2007, 09:26:17 UTC

squeaking is GREAT in my opinion ;) thanks so much for reading!

asinful June 1 2007, 14:46:37 UTC

So you basically had me the moment I read the author's notes. ;)

attempting some Dean-esque thing with your keycard while Jared has a giggle fit behind you

Heeeee! Jared is so not the only one having a giggle fit over this. Also, you do incredibly well at writing natural sounding American boy talk. I was never able to master that, not that I tried that hard or really needed to... Right. Moving along.

Jared purrs at the shell of your ear, his bottom lip touch, touch, touch like Morse code

This is kind of hot, even though it shouldn't be. I mean, I shouldn't find mentions of Morse code hot, right?

Looking to spice up your sex life?So either because I'm slow or because it's so late - probably a bit of both - this took me a few seconds to figure out. But then I just burst out laughing. Best thing ever ( ... )

mijmeraar June 3 2007, 09:30:06 UTC

you do incredibly well at writing natural sounding American boy talk.

aw man, thank you for saying that. because I always worry I lose an audience if people don't connect with the dialogue, y'know. so thank you. though someone pointed out I've written 'loo' which I know isn't an American thing but I couldn't help it ;)

hehe, i'm so glad you enjoyed this and that it was funny. honestly, i was giggling writing it and thought, hmmm is this actually funny or am I just projecting? so yay for that.

also, this is all the four boys together :D just imagine out the little woman in the middle.

soxykitty June 9 2007, 01:47:23 UTC

Omg and now I need you to tell me what you know about the history of this picture, if anything. Seriously that picture overwelmed me in the hot!

fromyourashes June 1 2007, 14:59:10 UTC

*laughing so hard*
that was just so cute, i'm rolling here.

mijmeraar June 3 2007, 09:32:42 UTC

heee, i'm glad to hear it! thank you.