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Nov 08, 2006 10:17

Title: Take my life and let it be.
Author: mijmeraar
Characters: Dean, gen.
Rating: 15+
Summary: Dean’s not just here for vengeance. He’s here to kill.
A/N: 573 words. Dark fic. Comments and Criticism Loved.

He mutters to himself as he scrubs his hands by the tap, he mutters, it was evil, it was your job, Dad will be proud. )

spn fic

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maharetr November 8 2006, 12:09:10 UTC
Oh, God, Dean.

This was beautifully written, and wah...
Dean trust his gut and aims and shoots and there’s blood and Sammy’s screaming and Dean’s not sure if its dead but its gone and they’re alive.

So heart-rendingly (is that a word? :)) good.

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mijmeraar November 12 2006, 11:17:34 UTC
If I understand what you mean we can break even and call it a word ;)

Thank you so much, I'm new to writing in the fandom so its nice to know that people enjoy my fic, and especially what they enjoy about it. Thanks again!

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embroiderama November 8 2006, 12:15:17 UTC
OH, wow. *shudders* Dean. Very intense--wonderful.

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mijmeraar November 12 2006, 11:18:58 UTC
Thank you so much. Your icon is just perfect [in the not so perfect sense].

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hiyacynth November 8 2006, 12:41:18 UTC
*is a giant girl* Oh, Dean.

That was just beautiful and painful and sad and so very Dean. Great job! I'm always amazed by people who can write short stories that kick this much ass. Excellent writing.

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mijmeraar November 12 2006, 11:23:36 UTC
Wow, thank you very much. I'm really happy that you liked it so much, I'm only new in writing SPN fic and love it, so I'm glad I haven't hit a brick wall. And yes, I'm with you: Oh, Dean. Gotta love the man.

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mijmeraar November 12 2006, 11:28:28 UTC
And I don't believe Dean to be somebody to switch off from it. He'll read the paper or listen to the radio and something won't be right and he'll want to get his .45 and go kill it. He won't be able to do 'normal'. Maybe I'm just a cynic.

Thanks so, so much for your feedback, it is really lovely and very encouraging =)

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mellaithwen November 8 2006, 17:04:30 UTC
very eerie insight into Dean there, good work :)

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mijmeraar November 12 2006, 11:29:33 UTC
Thanks very much =) Poor Dean.

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