Comments | mijmeraar: sound of silence, 15+.

mijmeraar

sound of silence, 15+.

Nov 28, 2009 19:04

Jared needs talk, needs words and knowing. Where he is, there’s sound, and waves and chorus. There’s life. It’s loud and brazen and sharp, echoes. It’s quiet, it trembles, there’s calm. Jared needs everything; he needs the world now, like a man behind the wheel but not holding on. The speed of sound ( Read more... )

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paintmydays November 28 2009, 13:49:05 UTC

You kill me. Why did you do this? Please, fix it =(

paintmydays November 28 2009, 14:30:52 UTC

killed*

It's amazing to me how your writing affects me.
♥

mijmeraar November 29 2009, 10:54:39 UTC

haha, I know, I suck. I don't know where this came from. I'm trying to write a fic that is basically the antithesis of this, and this is what came out in teh mean time. <3<3<3

paintmydays November 29 2009, 17:08:20 UTC

Awww! So that means that you are going to publish happy J2 fic some time soon! Yay!

bittersplendor November 28 2009, 14:16:49 UTC

Oh, so so gorgeous and heart breaking. ♥

hkath November 28 2009, 22:04:04 UTC

;_____;

sunnny November 28 2009, 23:14:57 UTC

AH MIJ, I REALLY LIKED THIS.
i love the flow of it - as in, even though it's a fairly small portion of writing, there's a really well established climax in the middle, and a gentle ease towards the end, and i imagine that's pretty hard to do in such a small space of writing. i really love that. its like....a wave. or something.

my jared ♥

enablelove November 29 2009, 00:32:12 UTC

:(

thanks for the heartbreak Mij! haha

Gorgeous