"Touch" (Ficlet)

[mijan]

Title:  "Touch"

Characters:  Harry and Draco (although the identities are slightly ambiguous)

Rating:  NC-17.  (Contains graphic sexual situations.  Do not read if you are offended by this, or underage.

Length:  2,300 word.  (This has NOT been beta'd yet.  This is a trial run.  The edited version will be posted soon.)

Dedicated to Rice, who is

Comments

[adinasauce]

Oh. MY. GOD.

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Do you know how much I absolutely love love love bottom!Harry?? *dead*

[mijan]

I take it this meets with your approval?

[adinasauce]

It's beyond metting it. It was awesome!

[oconel]

WOA!

I'm not too keen on PWP, but that was fantastic (and I'm not just talking about tied-up-harry) the rythm (text and action), Harry's despair, Draco's touch...

I understand share your mood

[dark_eyed_amy]

Ohmygod. *needs a cold shower*

YOUR FIRST TIME WRITING SMUT?! *is incredulous*

I strain up towards your open mouth, but you pull away, just out of reach, and you’re such a bastard.

*snickers*

AndIdon'tcarethatIwastooyoungtoreadthat.

[mijan]

Hehe. It's really not that good. Kinda cliched, and I really *really* need to edit it. I wrote it straight through, and there are still some pretty bad sticking points grammatically. But thanks for the encouragement!

[dark_eyed_amy]

It's really not that good.

You jest, good woman!

W O W!

[anonymous]

that ia amzing!

[curia_regis]

Woah. Smut written in stream-of-conciousness is the best! It is very realistic. Very realistic.

Mmmmm...