Serious beta help needed.
I'm working on finishing my last Star Trek Academy fic in the main story arc. It's a long fic, plot-heavy, and... you know how I write. Well, I need help. I need a beta who can help me take the last two chapters and trim out a whole lot of garbage. I know the chapters are too wordy and thick. I know that some stuff COULD be cut out... but for some reason, I really can't tell what parts need to go and what I need to keep. Maybe some of it can be saved or modified. I just don't know.
I need a HARD-ASSED BETA who will kick me around and put me in my place. Can anyone please beat up my fic for me? I've highlighted and notated all the parts where I'm having the most trouble. It's really only two chapters that need an ass-whooping.
Please? I'll write you porn in exchange for your help.
I need a HARD-ASSED BETA who will kick me around and put me in my place. Can anyone please beat up my fic for me? I've highlighted and notated all the parts where I'm having the most trouble. It's really only two chapters that need an ass-whooping.
Please? I'll write you porn in exchange for your help.