Well... I can describe it well because... I've done it. More than once. I rather like it. *grins more* I know that people can't always write stories based in personal experience, but I wish more people who DO have experience would write realistic stuff.
And oh GODS YES, that picture... if I didn't already absolutely adore lizardspots, I'd be head over heels for her now.
When I write BDSM, I try to make it realistic. But I'm really rather lazy when it comes to long sex scenes, plus that's usually the point where vocabulary limitations make it much harder (and I'm too lazy for endless engineering - did that in the beginning aka 2002, but today I rather short-cut).
If you snatch any obvious bdsm faults in my stories, feel free to drop me a message and poke me :)
Lizard, you are a genius! And Mijan... *waves shyly* Although you two inadvertantly caused me in my curiosity to finally (and accidentally!) find out what a speculum looks like! It was as scary as I expected. I am now a member of medical_fetish on LJ. You have corrupted me, and I never expected to say that at this stage of my life!! :)
Actually, my wife's favorite part of the whole fic was Bones' face. It really came out well. But then, so did the whole thing. GOOD GOD, MAN! *brain-melt*
Here via syredronning. I don't read that much K/Mc but couldn't resist the thought of needleplay. Will say more about the story after I've read the last part but first, I have to say this section is seriously hot. Guh.
The drawing adds another layer of guh, too. Kirk's body language is exactly as I'd envisioned it and McCoy's expression is absolutely delicious. The frown! An eye on Jim and how he's reacting and the slightly sadistic glint in his eyes. :D :D :D
I've seen so few good needleplay fics, and it just seemed like it would work with the character chemistry between these two. I'm kinda stunned at myself that I managed to write it... I like porn, and I'm quite comfortable with BDSM, but I usually write PG-13. I'm so glad people have enjoyed it. I didn't know how folks would react to it!
And oh gods, yes, the art. I kinda went through the run-down of what the scene looked like, giving lizardspots all the details so we were sure the art would match the fic. I mean... *GUH* Her art just about made my brain implode, and I wrote the damned fic!
*ded*
But thank you! Seriously, I'm glad you like it. :)
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This is the fucking best description of the sensations in a needle (pain) play I ever saw.
And the picture is.... mind-blowing.
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*beams* I'm really pleased you liked it!
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Well... I can describe it well because... I've done it. More than once. I rather like it. *grins more* I know that people can't always write stories based in personal experience, but I wish more people who DO have experience would write realistic stuff.
And oh GODS YES, that picture... if I didn't already absolutely adore lizardspots, I'd be head over heels for her now.
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If you snatch any obvious bdsm faults in my stories, feel free to drop me a message and poke me :)
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Although you two inadvertantly caused me in my curiosity to finally (and accidentally!) find out what a speculum looks like! It was as scary as I expected. I am now a member of medical_fetish on LJ. You have corrupted me, and I never expected to say that at this stage of my life!! :)
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*grins*
YAY for corruption! You're never too old to be corrupted. Seriously, that's a huge compliment. Thank you.
I didn't know there was a medical fetish comm. I should join! MUAHAHAHA!
And yes, Lizard is an absolute genius, and I adore her in every way.
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But yeah, the art was enough to make my brain implode. And I helped beta the art, and describe the details of the setup.
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The drawing adds another layer of guh, too. Kirk's body language is exactly as I'd envisioned it and McCoy's expression is absolutely delicious. The frown! An eye on Jim and how he's reacting and the slightly sadistic glint in his eyes. :D :D :D
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And oh gods, yes, the art. I kinda went through the run-down of what the scene looked like, giving lizardspots all the details so we were sure the art would match the fic. I mean... *GUH* Her art just about made my brain implode, and I wrote the damned fic!
*ded*
But thank you! Seriously, I'm glad you like it. :)
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I may not live through the next part.
The art.
The porn.
The detail.
The care. Because THIS. The care. That's what's killing me here.
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