Mar 04, 2012 02:34
Ya so this is just an over view of the ONESHOTS I hope to do on this project, the 1st was just posted previous to this post if you want to read to get an idea of how I am looking to have this go, and hopefully maybe some of you awesome writers that still might watch my page from time to time might take up the challenge/project thingy, *crosses fingers in hope*......AND OMG I CANT BELIEVE I HAVENT POSTED IN THIS JOURNAL FOR OVER A YEAR, MY BAD I AM SORRY I HAVE PUT I THINK ONE OR TWO ONESHOTS ASIDE FROM THIS ONE UP ON AFF UNDER MIJA IF ANYONE IS INTERESTED..BUT THOSE OF COURSE ARE YAOI SO BE WARNED, HUGGS MIJS..:-)
Lay Out for the story “THROUGH THE EYES OF A TEACHER”
1st Chapter- The Sage of Six paths and his two sons, also his pupils and the sage’s last thoughts before he names his youngest heir to his legacy, touches on the fight between brothers and the sage’s pain upon seeing it in the heavenly realm. Beginning of the teachers/pupil one shots. (Sage of 6 Paths/His 2 sons, the forefathers of the Senju and Uchiha clans, )
2nd Chapter- Focus on the Shodaime/Harishima Senju and his training with his brother who will become the Nindime, his thoughs on probably leaving young Hiruzen Saratobi as 3rd Hokage, again this based on the small flash back the third has about the 1st and 2nd when they speak to him on a hill overlooking Konoha, it will also focus’ on the fight between Harishima and Madara Uchiha. (In this one I see Shodaime as not only Sarutobi’s teacher but also his brother the Nindaimes since they had to start somewhere right? Although I am unclear who the Sandaime‘s teacher really was, was it both Senju brothers? I know Nindaime finally names Hiruzen the 3rd in the war there fore I see the Ninedame as the 3rds teacher as well)
3rd Chapter- Will focus more on the Nindaime and that moment in the war where Danzo flahes back to when he is fighting Sasuke, so I am going with the notion that the Nindaime was Sandaime’s teachers as well as Danzo’s and the two elders Hotaru and Koteru???? Have to verify names) So Nindaime thoughs as teacher and leader of these young nin and how he feels about them and his choices as he too sacrifices his life to save thiers so they can live and that Sandaime can become the 3rd and continue the will of fire.
4th Chapter- Will focus on Sandaime and his own pupils Jiraiya, Tsuande and Orochimaru, although it touces on his thoughts of all three he will focus his thoughs more on the way he felt when he discovered his student Orochimaru’s true nature, about his defection, and then his thoughts as he is fighting his student during the chuunin exams and his last thoughts before he dies of his way ward student, comparing his young precious younger self to his cold evil older self.
5th Chapter- This one focuses on Jiraiya, first him training with Minato, of the kids goofy ways, but strong will, eagerness to learn, then a little on the news of Minato and Kushina together, their news of impending parent hood and his last thoughts of Minato as he watches and hears from afar the moment his precious student will have to give his life and that of his small family to save the village, his reactions after seeing Minato and Kushina dead and his first thoughts on the only hours old Naruto who is now the reluctant Jinchurick of Kyuubi. Will flash to the future and will cover his thoughts on teaching an older version of that once long ago seen baby Naruto and his perception of his lost students child, his pride, his fears and his love for Naruto. Will briefly touch on his time while teaching Yahiko, Konan and Nagato and his thoughts before he dies about those students being the Akatsuki and their warped perception of peace, his last thoughts of his student Naruto and his apologies to his past pupil Minato before he is killed by another set of students he also once and still loved.
6th Chapter- This chapter will focus on Minato and his students Kakashi, Rin and Obito. His thoughts on all three and their differences, on the rivalry between Kakashi and Obito, the crush Rin has on Kakashi the he does not notice and the crush Obito has on Rin which she does not notice. How he feels about Obito’s death and how he couldn’t properly grieve for him as he still had two students and they were on a mission in a middle of a war. Later his thoughts and an older Kakashi and his change in attitude after Obito’s death. Then lastly his thoughts on his son as he is about to die, his wife and a last though on his last student whom he hopes will be okay without him and help watch over his precious boy.
7th Chapter- This is Kakashi’s story and his thoughts on team 7, the rivalry between Naruto and Sasuke, the resemblance to his own team and if his own Sensei ever got as exasperated. His thoughts on loosing Sasuke and being unable to help him as he ran off to one the legendary Sannin Orochimaru, then his thoughts of how he lost ALL students to ALL 3 Sannin, his lack of attention to Sakura, his need to distance himself from Naruto for seeing him hurt cause he was so much like Minato and Kushina. Touches briefly on Naruto’s defeat of Pein, the clone training in the words, Naruto’s use of Rasenshuriken on Kakuza and Naruto’s obsession with Sasuke and then how it not only angered him but hurt him to see Sasuke try to kill Sakura, to know Sakura still loved him and his breaking heart for the his one student that was killing himself to save those he loves by dying with his best friend when next they fight. (this will no doubt have to be revisited in a later chapter since Kakashi is still alive and currently fighting with Naruto in the War against the masked man formerly know as Madara lol)
8Th Chapter- This one will be shorter than most chapter but will focus on Tsunade her her teachings of Sakura, and her thoughts on how her and her team eerily resemble her own team and prays it had a better outcome than her own. Her thoughts on Jiraiya and Orochimaru, and then the news of Orochimaru’s death and then Jiraiya’s, she watches and talks to her dead team mates when she watches Naruto take Pein on and her own grief over it all. (again this one might need to be visited later or not since she isn’t Naruto’s teacher, but she is alive and a big part of Naruto’s life and Sakura too is also in the war and things are changing daily)
9th Chapter- Another small chapter and this one wont have to revisited since the man is dead. But this one will revovle around Orochimaru’s teachings of Sasuke, his brief stint with Akatsuki, his run in with Itachi and his last thoughts as he battles for his soul against his pupil Sasuke. Will try to touch on a bit about why he feels the need to never dye, flash back to the scene with him as a child in front of his parents graves with Sarutobi and finding the dead snake skin.
10th Chapter- Ok this one is not a huge factor in ANY thing really but it does touch on the lives of our hero Naruto. This one will be Ebisu’s story about his students but mostly Konohamaru, how at first he hates his students obsession with the jinchuricki, calling him boss and all. He will briefly touch on his feelings of Naruto teaching Konohamaru the Sexy no Jutsu and then Rasengan, his thoughts of when Pein attacks Konoha and Konohamaru saves him with the Rasengan and how proud he is of him. Touches on the scene we last as Naruto is welcomed home as a hero after defeating Pein. Oh and hes he will touch briefly about his abhorrence about teaching a younger Naruto as a favor to Kakashi for the Chuunin exams and his relief that Jiraiya took the brat off his hands. (who know’s if THIS one will ever need to revisited, since the mans is still alive but its very very doubtful, he is small fry but I think someone who has a link to the major characters needed to have a peice said.)
11th Chapter- And the last one I have for now in my head will be with Fukusaku (sp?) the toad sage. He will touch on his thoughts about Naruto and his training, about Jiraiya’s training and also compare them. His thoughts and pain about Jiraiya’s death at the hands of his own pupils, his frustration with Naruto and his pride at the battle with Pein.
12th Chapter- which is not a chapter persay but a side note, side fic, a brief look into the thoughts of Gamabunta, yes he isn’t a teacher but he was with all three of those that history has and will write about. First his pov on the fight with Kyuubi as he battles the demon with Minato and of the death of said fourth hokage, then of course Jiraiya and why he wants to pound Jiraiya but also his love for the old man as well as the grief he felt for the perverted sages passing. Then his thoughts on first a young impudent Naruto who first summoned him to save him from death from falling off a cliff Jiraiya himself had thrown the boy off of, then the fight with Shukaku and then the fight with himself and his siblings, Fukusaku and Shima and of course the boy who summoned him Naruto, who now stood before him no longer a boy but a man.
13th Chapter(this on is an IF chapter don’t know if I really want to do it and if I do it would be funny since 13 is supposed to be bad luck and I would say this man deserved all he got in the end…ok if written it would be about Danzo. I am still seriously debating on adding one about Danzo and him teaching Sai or at the very least being his boss, wasn’t Danzo also Itachi’s boss in roots (anbu) the one who gave him orders to kill his parents? Would be nice to touch on him a bit since he mentions Itachi a few times and his disgust for the mans affection for Sasuke and to see the results of the boys love for his baby brother who is not trying to kill him, and frankly succeeds at least as far as I know…who knows who in the heck Kishimoto sensei will bring back from the dead to give us all heat attacks lol. Again this is an iffy chapter not sure I will do it but I wanted to post it here just in case I do, get my thoughts down before I loose the mojo that is spurring me on right now to do this stories lol.
(yes I need to work a lot on it to find the right sequences and to put the info we do know in its proper place but since we never really get a POV of people in general especially before they die I want to take a more creative license, I hope by the time this is over and It will be, because I wont let it go on longer than what I have planned out already, maybe a few add ons later if needed but this will be the gist the beginning and the end of each chapter.)
(WOULD BE A GREAT PROJECT TO INVOVLE OTHER AUTHORS! HAVE THEM DO SOME OF THE CHAPTER THEMSELVES A HUGE COLABORATION, HELL I’LL SETTLE FOR JUST DOING THE INTRO WITH THE SAGE AND LET THEM ALL TAKE ONE SO THAT I CAN READ MUCH MORE AWESOME WRITERS DO THIS PIECE JUSTICE)
(Ah well none of this will happen if I don’t stop talking to myself while I type and get the nerve to ask someone if they could at least look at the chapter outlines and the first Chapter and see what they have to say, get some ideas, advice, some help with finding a beta, and what not. Just gotta find a place to ask and the nerve to do so…le sigh)
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