idea for chapter names
i believe that the first three chapters should be just the names of places they take place in.
The Broken Chair in spainish is the name of the bar pifflin is at in the beginning... it is known as the broken chair because broken chairs from drunken rage and stupidity created them.
PS. Side note soon to be deleted... Have the government dude explain to palmer that "most importantly" Palmer must be a civilain pilot so should he be found he will not be traced back to them. Other reasons are that there are leaks in the strongest of military securities and that simply their pilots are too busy.
Add in some kind of suspicion that he is lying to him, though. Maybe a flawed clue.
The Broken Chair in spainish is the name of the bar pifflin is at in the beginning... it is known as the broken chair because broken chairs from drunken rage and stupidity created them.
PS. Side note soon to be deleted... Have the government dude explain to palmer that "most importantly" Palmer must be a civilain pilot so should he be found he will not be traced back to them. Other reasons are that there are leaks in the strongest of military securities and that simply their pilots are too busy.
Add in some kind of suspicion that he is lying to him, though. Maybe a flawed clue.