for Lynn: Ashes to Ashes (Last Night) by serialkarma

[midsummer_fic]

Title: Ashes to Ashes
Author: serialkarma
Recipient: lynnmonster
Fandom: Last Night
Character(s): Craig Zwiller
Summary: Craig thought it was understandable that he was surprised when he heard himself say, "I--I can’t. Sorry. Gotta go," to the guy who was crouched over him with his dick in his hand

Comments

[pearl_o]

Oh, I LOVED this. Awesome.

[lynnmonster]

Ooooh, of course I love it anyway! And anticipation is the finest seasoning, (or something like that, anyway).

"Actually, no," Patrick said. "I was just thinking that I can’t imagine you ever getting married anyway."

Perfect!

[sageness]

Oh this is excellent. I love the parenthetical structure and the desperate whirlwind through the weeks...and then the end with Patrick is so, so very there. So inevitable and sad and right in that way where nothing's right at all because it can't be. *yay heartachey goodness*

[c_regalis]

Oh, I loved that. So beautiful and sad. And a wonderful last line.

[shayheyred]

Well worth the wait.