I've got to say, I'm very proud of this chapter. Sorry if this sounds conceited but I do feel this way, just because I feel really clever with the last paragraph (paragraph, not the sentence). I actually feel like a freaking' genius cos as I was writing that part, the words just came out from me without even noticing it or noticing the possibility
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Totally love the end!
Totally good storytelling
+ There were some lines where I went like "ah~ genious"
My favourite:
The girl just told me everything I wanted to know, even info that was useless to me.
that TOTALLY pwned me :D
*thumbs up*
Nene... can't wait to read your fic in arashirabu too~ {3
(I know you want proof-reading n stuff, but I totally want to share the experience with the others too {3)
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