keys party pt3

Mar 19, 2010 15:45

title: different tonight
pairing: cesc fabregas/david villa
rating: nc-17
disclaimer: fiction
warning: contains kink
keys party number three

this makes me nervous. kink is not my thing (though i love it when others do) but i wanted to try it. feedback is loved and appreciated.

different tonight )

footie!fic, david villa, cesc fabregas

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_runningmascara March 20 2010, 07:05:18 UTC
:D i like dom!Cesc, depsite him being difficult at time lol

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nanousblues March 19 2010, 23:04:00 UTC
*pants*

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_runningmascara March 20 2010, 07:06:06 UTC
*fans you & gives you water*
i'm glad you enjoyed it!

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nanousblues March 20 2010, 10:27:01 UTC
thanks *drinks*
Oh I very much enjoyed it!

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pretty_panther March 19 2010, 23:21:56 UTC
pppppst, couple of grammar errors bb, you have missed out a few words:)

But but but omg this is amazing! Sooo hot but I love how David is giving over control but at the same time, cant do it straight away. He questions and somehow that makes it hottor! Brilliant work and I like what you did with this. No need to be nervous at all

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_runningmascara March 20 2010, 07:08:29 UTC
i think i fixed most of them but please point then out if you see any more!

thanks babe you know how much difficulty i had with this! (hmmm this is how i see villa, dominant in nature so giving it up wouldn't be easy but he's not averse to it - well not completely)

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4jinx_removing March 19 2010, 23:46:08 UTC
Badass Cesc is soooo yummy.
You win at kink! (:

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_runningmascara March 20 2010, 07:09:13 UTC
thank you! i'm glad it works for you!

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totally_loca March 20 2010, 00:02:57 UTC
*lick lips* this is delicious. :) Shiny and unexpected.

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_runningmascara March 20 2010, 07:10:14 UTC
unexpected is good! thank you for reading!

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