fic: no place to be ending but to start

[midnightrambles]

title: no place to be ending but to start
pairing: david beckham/alexandre pato; david beckham/alexander pato/iker casillas
rating: r
disclaimer: fiction
summary: being as young as he is, everything is a learning experience for pato. pato's pov.

for my table. 004 dream.

Comments

[_belbis]

So, so, so great. Omg. And this, There are some people you can trust (Paolo with your life, Ricardo with your thoughts) this is perfect, I love it. ♥

[_runningmascara]

thank you! this was an experiment of sorts so i'm glad you enjoyed it!

[jungle_moon]

Oh wow..I thought it would be a typical, heartbreak story of a love triangle..but thank God it's not!

A threesome? And Iker and David are together again? YAAAYYYY! Of course, adding Pato in the 'middle' just make things slightly better! Threesome of them..who would've thought?! ;D

Thanks for this!

[_runningmascara]

becks and iker need a plaything from time to time :P

thanks for reading! :)

[heyaeroplane]

ah, i love this! i'm not usually a huge fan of second person (i've experimented with it a few times and it just never works for me, i guess i'm bitter!) but you make it work so, so well.

the progression is beautiful and seems so perfectly natural, and i love it.

[_runningmascara]

well thank you!
this is my second attempt at writing 2 person so i wasn't too sure about this but i'm glad it works for you :)