Fic: The Moment After

[midnightrambles]

Title: The Moment After
Pairing: Fernando Verdasco/Feliciano Lopez (Nando/Ana)
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Fiction
Summary: Sequel to Half Crazy. After the party ends, Ana asks Nando what's wrong and he can't lie...

a/n: ok so i set myself up for a sequel to the sequel *sighs*. All titles are taken from Musiq's Half Crazy.

Comments

[carolina30363]

Your style is beautiful, I love how you write...this was invoiving and so full of emotions...thanks for sharing

[_runningmascara]

i appreicate the comment! thank you :)

[piratesswoop]

When I read fics, there are rarely times I think about "the girlfriend" situation, and much of the time, I don't care about their feelings, but this is one of those times I read it and I feel so sorry for the girlfriend, especially with how you wrote her and Nando's relationship here. Poor Ana :[

That aside, I really liked how it segwayed into Feli and Nando talking. The image of Feli staring at his hand and then Nando taking it, etc, was so amazingly written. Does Feli really have the marks on his wrist? Anyway, I LOVED it, I hope you have more of these two, I love your Feli/Nando fics.

[_runningmascara]

personally i could care less about the girlfriends (lol) but i decided that Ana needed to play a proper role in this *nods*

As for the beauty marks on Feli's wrist, i have freaking clue. lol. i was going to write that he had a scar there, but beauty marks are better

thank you :) expect more feli/nando from me, i cant get enough of these boys!

[poppinrockz]

Heartbreaker :( The boys should be nothing but happy, all the time! (I joke :D)
I loved it all, especially Feli in this. The description of wrist (that paragraph in general) is beautiful.
You so rock, in so many ways :)<3

[_runningmascara]

i'll go back to writing happy fics with these two, i promise!
thanks hunny :)

[gryps_celsus]

OMG YAY FINALLY!!! WHEE!!!

You certainly have set yourself up for another one of these... because now you HAVE TO. I think you handled what happened in the last fic well and I just want to hug Feli and his whole "let's just call me an idiot and forget I said anything" bit. GDAW.

Love it, as always. Want more, as always. :D Whoo!

[_runningmascara]

how this came out wasn't what i initially had planned, so now there will be a sequel *headdesk*
wanting to hug feli goes without saying lol
thank you! i'm writing a chapter fic with these two, to which i hope to have the first chapter out maybe sometime tonight, or possibly tomorrow XD

[gryps_celsus]

I am convinced that 99% of fics never, ever work out the way you plan them to. 5 seconds after you put your fingers to the keyboard with a goal in mind the fic takes on a life of its own and you are downgraded to just being the medium. At least that is how it feels sometimes... like with the Andy Murray/Roger Federer plotweasels that have been taking over my brain. I don't even *like* Andy Murray!! ::headdesk::

Anyway, looking forward to your next fic! Always need more Feli/Nando! XD

[_runningmascara]

*nods* agree with every single word *facepalm*

i posted the prologue here, so check it out when you get the time :)

[scoobydumblonde]

Just curious, are you trying to make me cry?!

Seriously, this was so sweet, yet bittersweet at the same time. I love that Nando and Feli get to be together, but poor Ana. She def. didn't deserve that...

[_runningmascara]

nope, no crying! *sends you cookies*
i was a little mean to Ana *pets* but it was for the greater good lol

[scoobydumblonde]

*eats cookies and sniffles*

Just a little mean. And I guess, since it got Feli & Nando together... ;-)