Thunderstorm Cafe - Flesh_And_Steel Fanfiction contest Mech/Human

[midnightop]

Thunderstorm Cafe

by Midnightop

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Disclaimer: Well here we are my entry for the Mech/Human fan fiction contest on Flesh_and_steel.

usual disclaimer, I do not own transformers never have never will. I make no profit from this fan fiction it is simply for entertainment purposes I only own Lily my OC hope you like

Comments

[mmouse15]

It's very sweet. I like your Optimus. I'm glad you entered the contest, too!

If I may suggest something? Your word processor probably has a spell-check, and it would be helpful to your story to use it.

I hope you'll continue to write and give us more stories.

lol

[midnightop]

i know i noticed the mistakes after posting lol i was realy anoyed coz i thought i cought them all but thats what you get for not have a Beta lol i cant beleave i spelt Wheel wrong i read through it again the other day and was like WTF noooooooooooooo my entry is ruiined lol