Our new puppy is great!!! She's absolutely adoreable and has a lot of spunkiness and even a level of craziness I doubt I can equal ---- yeah, right, lol
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Thanks ;-) I'm always up for constructive criticism, and, well, any criticism or comments :-D
I just reread that poem ... I have no idea what's going on, lol Just random words really ... I think I had a plan, then rushed before class to write down the things I was thinking about, lol There's definitely too much going on :-D
"Show, not tell" is hammered into me as well ... This was an interesting poem, I pledged not to use "and" "or" and "the" in it, lol It didn't come out as I meant --- I blame too much reading of Blake recently :-D
There's two metaphors/images in "echoes" I want to continue playing with though ... I church poems up too often, but I'm rarely pleased or satisfied with them ...
hehe I'll try to put the "lit tendencies" to work, lol
Picked up? I doubt it ... I haven't spotted any young ladies I'm attracted to ... yet, lol Then again, I sit up front and don't really look around at all the women (heck, I don't really look in general) in the class. Actually, we have two other guys now, one added this morning ... It's kinda funny, I cause discussions to run late --- thinking outside the box in analyzing our readings, lol One girl went off on my comments today --- though she seemed to do it purposely, hehehe
Well, class was fun once again today ... I gotta read 100 pages in "Their eyes were watching God" now and then write up a paper (oh, I love the Honors stuff, hehe) ...
I'll try and post some better poems soon, if I get motivated enough, haha
I just reread that poem ... I have no idea what's going on, lol Just random words really ... I think I had a plan, then rushed before class to write down the things I was thinking about, lol There's definitely too much going on :-D
"Show, not tell" is hammered into me as well ... This was an interesting poem, I pledged not to use "and" "or" and "the" in it, lol It didn't come out as I meant --- I blame too much reading of Blake recently :-D
There's two metaphors/images in "echoes" I want to continue playing with though ... I church poems up too often, but I'm rarely pleased or satisfied with them ...
hehe I'll try to put the "lit tendencies" to work, lol
Picked up? I doubt it ... I haven't spotted any young ladies I'm attracted to ... yet, lol Then again, I sit up front and don't really look around at all the women (heck, I don't really look in general) in the class. Actually, we have two other guys now, one added this morning ... It's kinda funny, I cause discussions to run late --- thinking outside the box in analyzing our readings, lol One girl went off on my comments today --- though she seemed to do it purposely, hehehe
Well, class was fun once again today ... I gotta read 100 pages in "Their eyes were watching God" now and then write up a paper (oh, I love the Honors stuff, hehe) ...
I'll try and post some better poems soon, if I get motivated enough, haha
Take care peeps =)
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