Juliette is My Ring Ding Dong (1/1)
Thank you ever so much to death_note13 and syrraki. You really did encourage me to push past my comfort zone and actually made me want to finish this comfortable couple coitus, so I dedicate this fondue fic to you two
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WOW! um. okay. you were very serious!
my favourite part was:
“I know.” Closing his eyes, Sasuke absently sighs with this lazy kind of satisfaction. He rotates his hips, deliberately slow, and pushes himself a little further on Naruto’s cock.
Hahha, I love Sasuke there. Being a jerk in bed really makes him happy.
But Naruto! Naruto I love him! You're totally right, competent Naruto is the best. I do like playful sex scenes as well and I thought this was nicely balanced and intense in the right places.
I guess the only thing I would say is I'd have liked to have seen how they'd got started, but maybe that's a weird interest of mine.
WELL DONE FOR POSTING IT. I was like.. is she going to back out at the last minute?
I don't get the title though... Maybe I don't want to...
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But thank you. I really was going to back out at the last minute, still thinking about deleting the entry, so I'm glad you liked Naruto in this. 。(⌒∇⌒。) About the how they started, maybe next time? I know that would have been another 2k words, and this thing is already so long. >_<
Oh, the title is just a line from this song I kept listening to while writing; it's nothing bad, a reference to two other songs from the group who sang it. I just really liked the way it sounded.
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I see, so that is your 'writing porn' song.
This is mine: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8IHFVn0sv14
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Lol, not quite a 'writing porn' song, just my current infatuation that kept me going in the last stretch. I was listening to anything and everything for inspiration.
Oh, such a sad sounding song to me, but I like angsty sex, so that's okay. And this, too: "Felling any foe with my gaze". I liked that line.
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Aaah, atm, I'm obsessed with Young Blood by the Naked and Famous. It's the soundtrack to a desperate teen highschool narutoxsasuke fic and I am NOT going to write it. Guh but I can just SEE the overly casual, heavy with implications glances and the hopeful, going at it with everything they've got moments and
not going to write it.
but yeah.
GOOD JOB.
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Um, you should. *pokes* Really. You should write it. Seriously, if you already have a soundtrack, that's like three strikes in one. Once the music's there, you've no choice but to follow through. Drabble it out if you have to, but you have to, because there can never be enough desperate teen high school fics in this fandom.
If this prudish anza can write porn, you can write adolescent emotional turmoil.
Thank you, bb. If it's good enough for you, then I can feel a little less bad about it.
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you do it
i'm DONE.
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but no! I have paid my fanfic dues. I just need to finish Grind it Up and I'm out!
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Does this mean you're leaving Naruto, too? Is this finally the end of an era drawing on nigh? Will the fandom ever be the same again? Were the Mayans right about 2012?
Find out next time on I'm sorry. I'm just being dramatic.
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as if you titled this 'SHARP INTAKE OF BREATH'
I just laughed hysterically and I hope my mum didn't hear.
The mayans were almost certainly not right. I just can't do these big, emotional commitment projects anymore! I get the ideas, but not the power behind it to keep writing. idk why.
I'll probably keep up with lolsome pieces, tho.
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But yeah, I understand. Putting yourself in this kind of hobby, it really can require a lot out of you. (ᴗ˳ᴗ) I think I have one more in me and I'm done for good, too. I so envy those writers who can come out with pretty much a novel in a day. Lucky. (*~▽~)
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