Comments | michellemtsu: Fic: Winner at a Losing Game, ch. 1

michellemtsu

Fic: Winner at a Losing Game, ch. 1

Nov 14, 2007 22:00

Title: Winner at a Losing Game
Rating: PG-13, for now
Word Count: 806
Pairing: Mick/Beth
Spoilers: It helps if you've read Demons, but not necessary.
Disclaimer: CBS is the grand Pooh-bah, I'm just borrowing them.
Author's note: I've been asked to write a sequel to Demons and here it is! Well, the first chapter anyway. Hope you enjoy!

Chapter One

The dark ( Read more... )

fic, moonlight

Comments 9

lindyrb November 15 2007, 05:10:18 UTC

Oh good! I'm so glad you're continuing! One question - you mention that the time Beth was at Josef's before was an issue...that she hopes he does (or doesn't) want something provocative from her. Did I miss that somewhere? And did you mean did require or didn't require?

Please update soon.

michellemtsu November 15 2007, 05:13:49 UTC

I was referring to the visit from Arrested Development actually. I probably could have worded that better though.

femmephantom November 15 2007, 05:30:13 UTC

HA HA HA! The Brangilina reference is full of win. :D

I'm glad to see you're writing more.

michellemtsu November 15 2007, 06:06:43 UTC

I thought that was funny as well. Glad you're enjoying!

Freudian Slip anonymous November 15 2007, 05:33:33 UTC

I don't know if you meant to write this in or not, but in one of the last paragraphs, Beth monologues that she hopes that Josef did (does) require something so provocative of her. Was it meant to be that or just a typo?
BTW I'm freaking excited that you decided to do a sequal, to Demons!

Re: Freudian Slip michellemtsu November 15 2007, 06:03:17 UTC

You're the second person to ask me that and I'm not really sure. I guess I haven't decided yet.

shippercrazed November 15 2007, 06:03:07 UTC

Six months! We've missed six months of their relationship? all that shagging and hot steamy smut? Or hadn't they got to that yet in Demon's? I may be confusing it with another fic? I just remember Demons was really good. Like the beginning of this one too. Like that Josef asked specifically for Beth. Maybe he's softening up a bit? ...Nah!
Please post soon!

michellemtsu November 15 2007, 06:09:06 UTC

I nearly sit out my soda! That's so funny. I set this one six months later on purpose. I have a point, I promise. As for the smut...yeah, that'll be here too. Patience. :)

heartagram_lala January 9 2008, 18:02:02 UTC

oh yay, juicy, already intrigued =D